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for The Long Road

by SinisterMe

person Annika
schedule August 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh, you can't leave us hanging like this! Oh man....more when you can, please!!!
person Janelle
schedule August 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY! Update soon because that cliff hanger is quite the doozy.
person MagicalWinry
schedule August 10, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yay, so happy you updated! Great chapter, well worth the wait. However, I severely hoping the next chapter comes sooner because that is quite the cliffhanger you left us on. I hope Snape calls Harry in to smooth things over because I don't see an easy out for them otherwise. There were too many people in that waiting room for Snape to erase or alter all their memories this time.

In between your updates I like to think up likely scenarios of what could happen next in the story. So, in my own little daydream about your fanfiction, fan-fanfiction if you will, I figured Snape would need Harry's help and casts his Patronus to send a message to Harry ... however, I always got hung up on whether Snape's Patronus would still be a doe or if his feelings for Remus have progressed to the point it may resemble a wolf more or less. I also could not come up with the reason for Teddy's attack and escape from the Healer. So, PLEASE UPDATE SOON! :)

Additionally, I dread knowing the cause of what made Teddy bite and run away from the Ministry Healer. Teddy is such a good boy, so it scares me a little to think what may have made him snap.

Awesome chapter, you're a great writer, and I can't wait for more. Thank you!

schedule August 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh crap!!! What did they do to him?
schedule July 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh oh oh, what will happen now, this story is too good!
person starr
schedule July 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG where is Harry !!!!!!!!!!! he needs to help, nothing can happen to Teddy please don't !!!!!! Snape is going to have a cow and Lupin will lose it completely ...Thanks for the update please update soon :):):)):):):)
person AvidReader
schedule July 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story and I don't care how long you take so long as you finish it! :) I love the concept (even if it is a heart breaking one) and the way you pace it and that love was not something Severus and Remus just fell into immediately. I am, however, very concerned about teddy and hope that my suspicions are at least partly right that Severus has somehow cured him!!! Even if that's not true I can't wait for the next chapter so I can stop worrying. Keep at it! Your brilliant.
person azalea33
schedule July 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I always enjoy updates to this story! Thank you, and I look forward to seeing what happens next!
person ChaosLady
schedule July 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Excellent update! I don't mind the cliffhanger as long as you update soon.
person Annika
schedule July 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yay, new chapter!! I must admit, I started reading this fic solely for the (eventual) romance. But, then there was Teddy, and the battle against WIBNA, and now I'm completely intrigued by the mysterious test results. I'm guessing that has something to do with the whole mother-was-a-metamorphmagus thing...we shall see! And I do hope they all get out of the Ministry okay... I agree with ChaosLady: cliffhangers are okay, as long as the suspense is short-lived!