Ok, maybe I need to work on my reviews, the last one wasn't all that supportive or grateful! Pretty please can we have some more, I don't care how graphic it is really, I need to know that Severus will be ok! I'm checking daily and getting worried that you have deserted us :(
Oh my gawd. Now I've read a LOT of fan fics in my time and can say with certainty that this is one of the best! I'm so invested in this story and cannot wait to read more! I'm gutted I've run out of chapters, I want Remus, Severus and Teddy to just be happy after all this awfullness, Harry and Draco too! I really hope they will get him out of there asap and that the wizarding world are suitably outraged enough to stop them! I'm not overly familiar with WIP on this site so will go see if I can find a 'following' button lol :)
Oh my god! Less graphic please, definitely less graphic. That was seriously stomach churning. Draco is amazing though! Wish I was a bloke and he was real! Thank you
that was FAR more graphic than i was expecting.... please have Severus get out of there quickly because that was a lot to read :/
or at least of warnings at the beginning and end of the sections where explict torture like that is being described so readers can skip it if they wish
New chpter - finally!
It is dark and really unseateling, hard to read and yet fantastic. Just keep on writing, I want to see what happens next. I really do hope that Drako, Harry and Remus going to save him before 15 days are over.
Y'know... if I didn't ALREADY hate this guy...
This is very good. Edge-of-my-seat good. I now go back to cheering Harry and Draco on for a quick rescue mission so Severus doesn't have to suffer too long. Also, I hope someone eats Lanning. Anyone.
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I was hoping you weren't going to be too graphic or at least not do a play by play of Severus' torture. Excellent chapter.
Incredible! This is the most awesome fanfic (and I've read quite a few!), I wish I had constructive feedback to give but I'm just so in awe of your writing that I can't think of anything!