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for The Long Road

by SinisterMe

person Anonymous
schedule January 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

We miss you!  Please post some more.  Love this story!

person Anonymous
schedule December 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Please come back! This is just too good to stop now!

person Jana
schedule November 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I've just reread the whole story during the weekend and I have to say it's really amazing what you did here. It's a regular novel!

The scene that touched me the most is the one in the basement after the ministry official is sent packing with a headache and Severus sheds his clothes and kneels in front of Remus. I think it conveys perfectly how seriously he takes what Remus has to go through and how much he understands.

I hope we get to see Remus take care of Severus in turn when the time comes, and that Severus will let him.

 

person Anonymous
schedule November 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Wow, I'm now in love with Remus/Severus!   This as been a great journey, please keep going. I NEED to know how this ends, update asap!!!!!!!!

person Anonymous
schedule October 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Still waiting for you to come back, please let it be soon. This is just too good to forget about! Thinking about the story and rereading old chapters stops me being able to breath deeply, I can't stop the suspense getting to me for ages after.

person Anonymous
schedule October 26, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Beautiful story.  So well written.  Please continue it, I think my heart would break to know it's been abandoned. 

person lovely
schedule September 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Love this story! Pure amazingness.  Great characterization based on Rowlings and then having them grow and round to your own plot. 

Update soon.

person Anonymous
schedule September 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh wow! And I promised myself I would save up a few chapters if you came back hoping that would get Severus away and to safety, didn't manage that, cracked instantly! He is still there, oh I feel awful for him! No wonder you needed the time for that chapter. Unbelievably honest writing as always. Please can you let us know how much of the story is left? Thank you, what a gift, in so many different ways.

person Kvarta
schedule September 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I just melted with a story about them working together to free Snape.

And then I nearly started crying again. Poor Snape, didn't he suffered enough? :'( I know, I know, life is not fair. 
And I'm sitting on the edge of my chair again, waiting and dreading of new chapter at the same time. Just keep writing, I really do enjoy your style and the way you build up your story.

person Bikari
schedule September 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Absolutely love this story! I am looking forward to the next chapter and seeing how it'll work itself out. 👍😊