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for The Long Road

by SinisterMe

person Love
schedule June 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM

LOVE LOVE LOVE!  OMG UPDATE SOON! LOVE LOVE LOVE!

This is the most amazing story ever and I'm soooooo excited I found it!  

Pure magic!  

person etherian
schedule June 4, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Good lord do I feel wiped out! I hope that you plan on finishing this and that there will be another chapter soon.

You are a wonderful writer and you have done so well with Rowling's characters. Magnificent!

person etherian
schedule June 3, 2018 at 12:00 AM

OMG! OMG! I want to die for Severus, for Remus, for Teddy. Such a heart-wrenching chapter. I was not going to review at all until I read the most recent chapter (53) but this chapter has been too much. I hope that Severus is rescued and I want this (Dr. Mengele) to boil in his own blood.

person JSprinks
schedule May 12, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I just found this sorry this wekw and read all that you have posted in a couple days. It's an amazing work of art and I hope you will finish it! It had made me smile when your A/Ns have said you hoped we wouldn't be rolling our eyes or have seen things coming. For the most part, I definitely have not seen any of it coming. I was so sure they'd find a way around Severus having to go with Lanning. I'm glad they are finding a way out, but I'm terrified what that serial killer will do now that he knows the clock is ticking. I love what you're doing with the "boys" as Remus referred to Draco and Harry. And Teddy is wonderful. 

Happy writing!

person Love Love LOVE!!!
schedule May 6, 2018 at 12:00 AM

AMAZING story!!! I'm still sizzling!  You've changed my life :)   

UPDATE ASAP!  So happy to see Snape coming home ... and hopefully Remus can save that little boy in the cell while he's there ... slip him that portkey or something ;) 

person Su_san
schedule April 17, 2018 at 12:00 AM
person Su_san
schedule April 17, 2018 at 12:00 AM
schedule April 14, 2018 at 12:00 AM

PLEASE update!! I'm just getting into this and I want to see what happens!!

person Laura
schedule April 11, 2018 at 12:00 AM

omg omg he’s coming home!! These last few chapters of Sev being there have been torture 😭😂

person pimpinella
schedule April 10, 2018 at 12:00 AM

This last chapter finally made me smile. When I got thinking why I liked it so much I realised that it's because Remus and Severus finally are together, even if briefly. It has been 7 days apart for them but it has been years for us readers! I hope that they'll stay together from now on.

(And sorry for not commenting on several previous chapters, it used to be required to register as a user which put me off.)