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for The Long Road

by SinisterMe

person Anne
schedule December 3, 2024 at 12:00 AM

I really think this is the best Harry Potter fanfiction I have ever read. Nothing beats it for wish fulfilment, plot twists, characterisation, everything. Please, please, please, don't leave it unfinished. You are so close to having all the loose ends tied up. I've been so patient, but am missing the characters I have fallen in love with. Please continue, you still have an eager audience

schedule July 10, 2023 at 12:00 AM

Drarrrry. 

Ah, I can't believe I've come to the end of the story so far. I need answers. D; It's amazing that Daniel will be able to be cured now - but who is he?? It's so mysterious, I need to know. It's so interesting he was oblviated and he knows nothing about his past. Darien, hurry up before the curiosity kills me! D; Also I can't wait for Teddy and Daniel to meet, I wonder how it would go. 

Meanwhile, I'm excited for Hermione to come over and help work on the lycanthropy cure, not to mention the fight for freedom that continues to march on. I'm so glad so many people have banded together to do the right thing. It might take some time, but there's no way at this point that they won't up winning, because they will. ^^ 

I really hope to see more of this soon! It says you haven't edited this story since 2021 though so I'm a little worried, though I know you updated AO3 in June. I hope everything is OK in your life and that you are doing well. 

schedule July 9, 2023 at 12:00 AM

Made an account on here just for you, I hail from A03, lol. ^^ I love Sebastian, he really seems like a stand up guy. Sev really needs to deal with his trauma more, it's not healthy. You can talk to Remus, Snape, he's right there for you. It would probably good for him to talk out loud about it.

schedule July 9, 2023 at 12:00 AM

Made an account on here just for you, I hail from A03, lol. ^^ I love Sebastian, he really seems like a stand up guy. Sev really needs to deal with his trauma more, it's not healthy. You can talk to Remus, Snape, he's right there for you. It would probably good for him to talk out loud about it.

schedule July 9, 2023 at 12:00 AM

This chapter hurts. Poor Teddy, that is just heartbreaking hearing a kid say stuff like that. D; 

person SummerDance
schedule February 22, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Still reading and checking in occasionally to see if there are updates. This is very well written with an engaging storyline. Looking forward to more.

person Ninafia
schedule February 1, 2022 at 12:00 AM
person Rachie
schedule October 26, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Wonderful story, thank you for continuing to update it. I look forward to reading more :)

schedule October 15, 2021 at 12:00 AM

This is a very well written work. The attention to detail is incredible. How are you able to put a potion together with such specifications?

I am thoroughly enjoying the character development from each of your players and I can't wait to read more. 

I may have stayed up all night recently reading this story, just to let you know how much I've been enjoying it. 

Cheers!

person just another reader
schedule September 12, 2021 at 12:00 AM

I remember reading this like years ago, and thinking it was one of those many abandoned fics that plague sites like these. I was wrong, and I'm so happy you continued, because you took over my head cannon, and your story is so well written. Even that one comment in here ... somewhere ... critiquing the food these characters eat, and including a lecture about manor houses, lol, it's been a while since I read it, but I loved it. It in itself is letting you know the standards that YOU built up, that these details are someone's critique. Your story is GOOD. Keep going, please. I feel sorry for those readers at the other site, waiting for chapter 46, lol.