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by goldhorse

schedule March 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I must admit that I think Mcgonagal is going a bit far, though I could understand it if she was incredibly worried lol. Sounds like a lovely feeling they are being forced to deal with. Can't wait to read more!
schedule March 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco and Hermione, such awful side-effects. But the 'quickie-in-the-loo cure' was GREAT!!!!! You really are a sadist with this story. Not just for the characters, but also with your cliffies!?!?!?!?! I still wish to lay an offering at the altar of your muse..."Oh wonderful, kinky, sadistic muse; I love your KINKY, HOT and WICKEDLY EROTIC gifts"!!!!!!!!!!! More, Please!
person Kimbovet
schedule March 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
My favorite line: "Even as a portrait, Dumbledore was a meddlesome menace. How she missed him." I think McG knows more about what's going on than she lets on. ;-)
schedule March 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am glad you are back and feeling better. I enjoyed the plot chapter, I know that they are necessary for the story to move. But I always enjoy the hot, kinky sex. So tell your muse that I love her and wish to place a 'toy' basket at her feet. ;) As always...More Please!!!!!!!
schedule March 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter. Leave it to dumbles, even dead to know what is going on lol.
schedule March 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I think she knows about Snape.. that he's alive... so to speak.
schedule March 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really hope Snape doesn't call for them tonight. He had to have known McGonagall was going to do something like that. She was definitely a lot more lenient than I was expecting, I must admit. However, I definitely like the idea of them spending all day with her as a punishment. It's effective and lets her keep an eye on them. Genius. Oh, and you're updating super quickly. I love it! Keep up the good work! My day gets a little better when I can come home and read your latest chapters.
person Sera21
schedule March 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm totally for teh suspension of disbelief in the name of hot porn but really? She CRIED when he took his finger out of her arse? Do you have any idea what it feels like to have a large object in your arse? Sure its filling and hot but your every natural instinct is screaming for you to get it the fuck out. There is just NO WAY anybody would cry over somebody removing a finger. I'm calling BS.
schedule March 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I didn't review the last few chapters, but I just got around to checking to see if you'd updated yesterday. So imagine my surprise when there are 5 new chapters up! Woohoo!! A lot more plot in these ones, and it's very exciting to read. I honestly can't wait to see what McGonagall says to them. They can't tell her the truth, so I'm looking forward to their excuses as well. They're too smart to be found out yet. You're an amazing author and I look forward to all your works.
person Kitty
schedule March 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
great story and I love it!! please update soon!