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February 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hullo dear author,
I'm really enjoying this lovely plot you've developed. I just read the entire thing in one day if that is any indication. I cannot wait to read what comes next. Now on to the actual review.
Snape: I love how you've worked him around. He's still snarky and gittish, but you've shown some vulnerabilities that a lot of people probably don't' think he has because he's always been so confident as a potions master. I like that you've really stressed his protectiveness which I noticed from book one. How may other things would make someone take the spy work on that Snape actually took. There was no self preservation there, simply selflessness. Well done for drawing that out. I like that you've cued him into their struggles and explained what they ware without constant over explaining flashback. Thank you for that.
Hermoine: I love that you've kept her fire, but you don't have her coming through something as terrible as the war was, and the atrocities she must have seen without so much as a scar. You've given both her and Draco basically magical PTSD. The fact that she's craving home and family is good, but you don't have her striving to be the next Molly. She still wants the life she wanted before, to have a career. It's truly a typeset character and you've worked well withouth changing her too much.
Malfoy: Well done with him, there is so much to go into that honestly neither of us has that kind of time. I'll simply say well done.
Lavender: Thank you for giving her something more than a brainless chit look. /she always struck me as more.
I'm really enjoying this lovely plot you've developed. I just read the entire thing in one day if that is any indication. I cannot wait to read what comes next. Now on to the actual review.
Snape: I love how you've worked him around. He's still snarky and gittish, but you've shown some vulnerabilities that a lot of people probably don't' think he has because he's always been so confident as a potions master. I like that you've really stressed his protectiveness which I noticed from book one. How may other things would make someone take the spy work on that Snape actually took. There was no self preservation there, simply selflessness. Well done for drawing that out. I like that you've cued him into their struggles and explained what they ware without constant over explaining flashback. Thank you for that.
Hermoine: I love that you've kept her fire, but you don't have her coming through something as terrible as the war was, and the atrocities she must have seen without so much as a scar. You've given both her and Draco basically magical PTSD. The fact that she's craving home and family is good, but you don't have her striving to be the next Molly. She still wants the life she wanted before, to have a career. It's truly a typeset character and you've worked well withouth changing her too much.
Malfoy: Well done with him, there is so much to go into that honestly neither of us has that kind of time. I'll simply say well done.
Lavender: Thank you for giving her something more than a brainless chit look. /she always struck me as more.
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February 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Eager to learn about the changes Hermione is going to face.
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February 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
hello long lost writer,
glad your back in the writing saddle again.
I am all caught up.
so happy to ready your story again.
understand completely about the real world.
hubby keeps trying to win the powerball but no such luck
understand about the busy life
keep up the good job of being wonder mom....
glad your back in the writing saddle again.
I am all caught up.
so happy to ready your story again.
understand completely about the real world.
hubby keeps trying to win the powerball but no such luck
understand about the busy life
keep up the good job of being wonder mom....
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February 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Incredible story, great writing, and delicious smut! What more could a girl ask for? Look forward to more!
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February 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh... Darling, you are a constant source of inspiration to me! A fantastic story, can't wait for more!
I also love your fanged Snape. Always such a delight.
I also love your fanged Snape. Always such a delight.
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February 6, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm confused. Why was she petrified if she was wearing the glasses? I thought the glasses kept them from being killed or petrified. Anyways, PRETTY PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SUPER SOON!!
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February 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great use of innovative magic spells and devices in this chapter. Even with all those spells, Hermione and Draco are seriously injured again? They need some of your innovative magic to create some better protection. Can you keep them safe and healthy for a bit? At least long enough for some great sex and revelation of their true feelings for each other? Ah, but you know best. Love this story.
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February 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back lady!!! Missed ya! Glad the basilisk hunt is now over but Hermione gets petrified again, is too funny. Snape will not be pleased. Look forward to their next adventures & of course, the smut. :-D
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January 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see that that mission with the basilisks is done. You truly have a gift for writing. :D
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January 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back!
More please?
More please?