rate_review Reviews

Your cliffhangers are the most evil, vile, repugnant things in the universe and I love them. Totally. I'm like addicted to coming back and seeing what's new and what's been added to. Definitely an addiction. But worth it because you're writing is phenomenal and this is shaping up to be just as good as your other SS/HP/DM stories. It's fast become one of my favorites that's for shore! Thanks bunches for sharing this with and update soon!

Well I wish to start this off by saying that once again you have started a story that I can not wait to read more of. In fact were this a book I'd be horridly tempted to call out of work for the day just so I could read it without putting it down. I have read several pieces of your work, and while not all have been as absorbing as this one is, more of a statement of taste for the particular piece of work then the quality of it, and I have come to, for lack of a more apt phrase, stalk your profile, looking for the next chapter to some of your ongoing works as well as any new shorter ones.

I must admit with some of the other works I have read, I was shocked, pleasantly so, at the tone of this one. The way you are portraying the characters in this is, in my humble opinion at least, well balanced and thought out in such a way that they do not 'break character'. I do not know if you are planning on showing a bit more of the past with these men, and the others in their lives, history that led to them being who they are in this piece, but I would like to say it would interest me greatly. Another part of this is wondering if you will delve a bit deeper into their minds. I must admit that I have yet to figure out which would interest me more, getting even deep into all of it, or being left free to make my own conclusions about all of it. Something that makes me happy, as it means the writing has engaged me in such a way that while waiting for the next part to come out I am thinking about it.

Forgive me if I have rambled and made little sense. That there is little criticism of this story is only proof that I could not find anything that needed to be improved for me. While aware that I have not helped you in any way, I could not stop myself from letting you know that I enjoy your writing very much, and can not wait for the next chapter. The only real question I have is a basic one, and one you might not have the answer to just yet. How long a story do you think this one will be? I believe, from reading your works as many times as I have, and please forgive me if I have presumed to much, that you plan your works very much in advance.

~Bri

about #5...

Ooo..Harry's doing a striptease! :-)

I keep forgetting you have this story written, have to take notes just to remember.
You know I hope you don't make Harry TOO submissive.

Harry is getting in deep fast! Between Draco's very sexy smile and Severus' all too sex worthy voice, who wouldn't. I can't wait for the next chapter and the slow reveal of Harry to two delectable men!

~~ Meechy

Really enjoying these versions of Draco, Severus and Harry!

Yes I'd say poor Harry is way out of his comfort zone. He at least used some of that famed Gryffindor courage and tried what he saw and while not perfect bliss, it definitely gave him some food for thought. Better yet it gave Severus ideas that he worked on so now he and Draco are closer than ever. Things are definitely looking up, even if they are HARD right now.

~~ Meechy

Ch. 4

For some reason I wasn't expecting that. Silly me. Loved it!

whoo hoo sexy!!! So hot and bothered without even taking their clothes off. When everything is new and just thinking about the situation is enough to get them going... love that period in time described and you did it so well :)

While this story is a bit different from my normal reading material, I thought I would give it a chance. And I am very glad I did :) Harry's reactions are priceless lol. I can't wait to read more!

Nervous Harry is so cute :)