rate_review Reviews

I really liked the story and even Harry's wife. Though I kind of winced when Malfoy's money and standing were taken from them, especially since both Narcissa and Draco saved Harry's life(Not sure if the same is still true for your story. Though Narcissa did say that she save Harry.) Was wondering if this means there will be Malfoy bashing too? If so, could you tell me? I really like the story but I really can't read Malfoy bashing, I'm not saying this to change your mind or anything, it's just my preference. Haha and if not, would Draco be gay in this? I would totally love that.

I'm not sure about harry's personality in this because I believe your main focus now is introducing his wife to us and I think Narcissus is quite sweet. Can't wait to see how Harry is really like in the next update!

Last thing, I really like the idea of the story, especially since Harry is the dom. But maybe you might need a beta? Just for the few grammar and spelling mistakes.And for the story to flow well.

Now this is a very different story! I like Harry's "wife". Would love to read about them interacting more. Harry is so casual about "oh well I'll divorce him later if I find someone I like better". Not very nice Harry! Didn't they make vows or anything? Isn't he even going to try to get along and maybe care for each other or even fall in love...geeze!! Draco needs to talk to Harry or at least "wifie" (can't spell his name) before he loses it. Harry should settle some money and Malfoy manner on him...I think anyway.