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Please update chpater 9 soon ^_^

I like this though it's moving really slowly at the moment. I also feel like Remus and Lucius are being left out in terms of relationship development because of the being used as a go-between through everyone. A bit unbalanced.

Snape is a brilliant potions master but a terrible secret keeper. He's really turned into a bit of a bully. I hope someone calls him on it because he's definitely going to stick his nose where it doesn't belong and cause a scene.

Gah! You're killing me here with the suspense of The Big Reveal (severus) and The Confrontation (molly et al) :-)

I think this story is moving up in the rankings I have of your stories. Can't wait for more!

I am and am not looking forward to the showdown with Molly et al. It's sure to be explosive and I suspect much will be revealed, especially given the name of your story.

I was laughing when Draco lost his wand, then the part with being banned from his father. classic and apropos.

Severus is making progress it seems, still not in any way trustworthy with personal info on Harry and Sirius. I'm laughing when I imagine that they found a spell that protects Severus' victims from his emotional sadism but the consequence is that he can barely get word edgewise. Since everything that comes out of his mouth is designed to hurt, to beat down, to make sure he's some sort of winner he won't get a chance to speak much at all until he learns how to get along with others.

I look forward to more of this story!

Sounds like there have been a few breakthroughs. I hope so. Though, the scene with Draco was awful. He is SOOOO spoiled and I really feel for Charlie, who has to put up with him. I do hope that Draco graduates toddlerhood soon! :D

Thanks! Am going to be giggling for awhile over Draco's situation... Even while feeling empathy for Charlie's position in dealing with the brat, it couldn't have been made more blatantly clear by the bond (or the universe) that Draco's method for dealing with crises was and is seriously wrong. Can't help but wonder what will make him finally grow up because it's blatantly obvious that Charlie isn't going to back down regardless of the consequences.

All of the other bonded groups have seemed to come to further understanding within their individual bonds and that leads one to wonder just when and what the next crisis to hit the household will be. Is it going to be of the red-headed variety or are the boys going to have a chance to plan before that eventuality?

Have been wondering if Severus might actually turn a corner and land fervently on Harry's side if/when he discovers the whole situation surrounding Potter and Dumbledore...

Ch. 6

Poor Harry. Severus is turning out to be the male version of Hermione in his determination to know everything about this situation - and wouldn't he hate that comparison? *chuckle*

Looking forward to the next update.

I continue to like this story! I find it interesting how in each story you wriite, the characters are different!
I don't think that draco will be a problem because Charlie will act if he becomes too annoying. But severus, he will be a big problem and it annoyes me that he wants to know all. Why do they have to answer his wuestion when he was nasty with them? This chapter shows it perfectly: i mean that he see Harry seuffered but not him going seeing a ehaler is not normal!!!
Poor Harry, he's not lucky. I really like how Lucius is

Another great chapter! I can see how eventually this group of people will be bonded very close together due to self preservation, given all the tangles and loyalties, that it will become the group against the world. Severus and Draco must, out of necessity for their physical well-being and entire future, become trustworthy. Must become more loyal to the group, that their own self-importance. It will be a rocky road for them, and my heart breaks a little more for Narcissa each time she is mentioned. I just can't wait for more!