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by SpeedyTomato

person autumngold
schedule January 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love your excellent update! I am so glad that Sirius is finally wanting the bond between Harry, Bill and himself! Thank goodness he is no longer going to fight the thought of being in a threesome. Harry couldn't have found two better bondmates! He now has two people who will love and protect him forever. Fabulous new chapter! Thank you so much for your wonderful update! Can't wait to find out what will happen next!
person psychosmurf
schedule December 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch16: Cool that Draco put it all together that way
person autumngold
schedule December 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your excellent new chapter! I don't understand why everyone is so concerned about why the wards are keeping Molly out? I would think that would be a good thing?! Any day without having to hear from the loud mouthed harpy would be a blessing. Personally I think all of the spells on Molly, Ron, Hermione and Ginny are perfect. Hopefully now when Hermione starts to try to force her opinions on others she will lose her voice, when Ron makes his disgusting comments he turns into a creature, when Ginny tries to put her grubby hands on someone they disappear. It would be even better if whenever Molly started to scream at someone she would be forced far away from them. Your story is absolutely wonderful! Can't wait for your next chapter!
person staar
schedule December 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
nice it had to be Draco to figure it out !!!! thanks !!!
person psychosmurf
schedule December 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch 14: OMG The best chapter yet. LOVED what Harry did
person staar
schedule November 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
wow loved that Bond that their are in....Molly sure got what was coming or did the rest !!!!!!!!!! still laughing over all of it......so good !!!! thanks for the update !!!!!!
person snape_lust
schedule November 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
yay! a new chapter!

I don't really understand why Harry is feeling guilt. If there was any scenario that would justify not feeling that particular emotion, it's this one. Plus, just as a personal quirk, I hate reading characters that wallow in guilt when it's undeserved. It's annoying and a turn off. I would think a smidgen of regret that it went that far, or perhaps a small bit of shame b/c he couldn't control the outburst, but not guilt for (minor) consequences that resulted due to it being 100% Molly and co's fault. I would think lingering anger or indignation would be more appropriate to feel. I hope Harry ditch's the wallowing when he did nothing wrong.
person autumngold
schedule November 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your new, fabulous chapter! I love the fact that Sirius made it where Molly, Ron, Hermione and Ginny can no longer get into his house. After the way they treated everyone there, they deserve to be out in the cold. I just wish that Sirius had also made it where Arthur could come back either. All he will do is try to make everyone feel sorry for him and Molly. Excellent update! Please post another chapter soon!
person Meiya
schedule October 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! So glad they told Molly off like that, love what happened to Ron, ginny and hermione too! Can't wait for next chapter :D
person staar
schedule October 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
need updates !!!!!!! updates 1!!!!!!! so good need more !!!!! :):):)