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This was a bit of a placeholder - no real progress in plot or information -- but it did a nice job establishing where the relationships stand at this time. Everyone is edging more towards acceptance. I'm kind of hoping to see the twins eventually be even more active in soothing Severus, but there is a real barrier right now because they are slightly adversarial, with trying to hide and gain information from each other. Cooperative, but not really accepting, if that makes sense. Its more a cease-fire than a relationship. Is Harry a horcrux? Does Albus think/know he is? Have the Terrible Trio be sworn to secrecy so that when school does start up, they aren't revealing the bonds to everyone? That would totally be Ron in a snit.... I think Lucius is, surprisingly, one of my favorites in how he is handling things. And SUCH a contrast to Draco. LOL.

Please update the older stories. SS made a vow to protect HP and AD is endangering him so SS is no bound to AD he just has to find out about the abuse and manipulation to eventually kill HP. Is HP a horcrux or did the bonding destroy it too?

thanks for the update, can't wait to see what Snape does and when Harry finally leaves !!!!

Thank you for your incredible new chapter! It is so nice how all of the couples (and triples) are starting to accept and enjoy their bonds. Hopefully they will be able to help each other against all of those, especially Dumbledore, who only care about the prophecy. Outstanding update! Can't wait to see what will happen next!

I'm happy for an update to this story and can't wait until another big event happens. Not that I'm pressuring or anything, but it's always fun to read some good ole fashioned drama :-)

so the twins spying on Snape and Snape trying to find info also...so funny but Snape really needs to see Dubbles in the wright light there,,,as an ass.....thanks for the update...loved to see Malfoy sr . getting to be attached to Lupin!!!!!and Draco seeing that everything is not as black and white as he thought !!!!

Hey just a suggestion this time. You always have such interesting story ideas but many times you have consecutive chapters that mainly consist of plans... Individual plans, couple plans, group plans, planning to make more plans...it doesn't have a lot of action or activity which would give a better balance to the story. For example, you might have included severus having a conversation with the twins to show how their relationship is developing which then would give him those thoughts he had about getting information but not wanting to hurt his bond. Including a variety of actions and interactions to show them carrying out the plans is more interesting than them talking or thinking about their plans. I really do enjoy your stories and creativity and look forward to you continuing to develop as a writer :)

Yeah.... I think Severus is going to be the downfall of this entire house of cards. Just the fact that he's trying to circumvent the bond and privacy issues so he can go blabbing to Albus shows his not-so-good character. I just don't trust the git. I seriously hope he's made to take a super restrictive vow on his life before anyone gives up any info. He's just not trustworthy. Albus doesn't need to know anything about anyone in that house. It's none of his business and he's never actually been a help. People have to figure out their own problems, even when Albus is trying to convince them that he's helping. He doesn't help, he manipulates.

I'm really anxious to see how all the plans work out, as well as learn more about the bonds :)

Hi, I have been following your stories and you have very original plot and story lines. I can tell that you take the time to review and make sure everything is written correctly. However, I have noticed that you tend to use the word plenty a lot and odd bits, especially when the characters are thinking about what needs to be done or what has happened in the past. I am personally left wondering what do they need to do? What's plenty? What are they thinking about? I think you know, but the characters are not letting us, the readers, in their thought process. I am not expert in writing, but I do hope this is helpful to you.