love this story hope to read more of it.
I just stumbled upon this story and I love it! Keep writing!!
I love this story! It's well thought out and exciting to read, I can't seem to put it down. Can't wait to see what's next! Great job!
I love this story! Keep writing please
I find the lack of smut disgusting ;)
Kidding it's refreshing, and a brilliant read. I've signed up for updates and can't wait to read more. Just figure I'd tease a bit first.
On that note I can't log in, silly site. Or I'd log in. Maybe I need to sign up again? Dunno how to do that, and I'm done rambling, continue on :D
This chapter moved at a faster clip that the previous few. The story seemed a bit bogged down or stalled.This chapter seemed to be a bit of a kick start.
Still don't trust Severus's motives. I think he'll figure out a way to betray harry and the secrets of the house.