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Hot damn.

Hot, Hot, Hot!!!! I loved the 'ladies' room scene with Mina. The comment about Hermione's vibrator had me rolling on the floor. I sexual banter after they left the restaurant was...PRICELESS!?!?!?!?! More, Please!!!!

love this. her friend is hilarious, i see Mione snapping when shes bragging and being like well listen to this....then get all flustered because she hasnt done it just talked about it.

OMG This is awesome!! Really not sure I can say anything else! Hot! Hot! Hot! Truly fabulous writing!!I can't wait for more!

You never disappoint. Ever. Damn, you're good. Hell, I could go for a smoke after reading that!

Aaaah! Mean cliffhanger! I can't wait to see their reactions to finding one another there. Update soon please! <3

Damn that was hot. Her reaction when she finds out it's Snape is gonna be priceless. In the mean time keep the dirty talk coming lol

gandering-at-alan here and I have to say that this was incredible. So fucking hot that I can't even function right now. You are truly gifted my dear. Looking forward to more ;)

This is such a nice start here. I love the teasing and the back and forth.
I read a story sort of like this years ago, but it went unfinished and wasn't nearly as interesting. Please, keep going.

On the first side, I like being able to follow a story as it updates and enjoy a little suspense while I wait for the next chapter. On the other side, sweet mother of fuck, I'm enjoying this story so much I wish I had found it when it was finished so I didn't have to wait. I honestly would buy the shit out of any erotica you could publish. This is fantastic. I'm usually one to notice typos and mistakes, but I haven't noticed anything yet, whether it's because I'm too enthralled or because there are no mistakes I haven't a clue. So looking forward to the next one!