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for Fate Falls

by Sealpotter

person FaeChild
schedule October 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
One word... Cliffhanger... I hate you...
person slmncpm
schedule October 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
anything for love, just a piece of wood, and ghost magic get my votes for a story. *smiles* they all sound lovely. i am sure this isn't very much help. *hands you scones*
person FaeChild
schedule October 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I have read what you have written so far and have only one thing to say:

MORE!!!!

Please, dear god, give me more. I'm greatly enjoying this story and can't stand that I have to wait for the next update.
person Anon
schedule October 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
person Kat
schedule October 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome sauce!!! Poor Vince but he was gonna end up that way anyway. Yayayay Sirius!!!!
schedule October 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You are a witch, almost as good as the great JKR, and yes, I am enthralled with this fic! BDF
person staar
schedule October 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
well Fudge got his but to me should have gotten more....did they kill Vincent or just made it to look like it .....man I thought that Snape was going to pop the ?? in public ( wish that happens just to see Siris reaction ) my god can't wait til your next update ....you left us hanging !!!!!!!!!!!!
person staar
schedule October 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
wow this was a good one !!!! hope this is to clear harry's godfather and also to clear Draco's mom......hope Fudge gets his due now ......

and on your voting NO NO NO NO on Amnesia/Obliviate- they have been though so much already ...I like I would do anything for love..
well lets see how it work;s out...thanks for the update see you soon !!!!!!!!!!!!
person djaddict
schedule October 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Interesting choice for Albus and kind of surprising actually. I really didn't expect him to be judged as well, although I know that is not strictly true, that is how it appears.

I love the little glimpses of people that Harry knew in the future that he encounters now. I feel so bad for him because those stories more than the main events that seem to be the most painful and burdensome.

I really can't wait for the next chapter, this has been a long time coming.

Nit-pick - you have breath instead of breathe somewhere in the middle where Harry "sniffs" Draco
person staar
schedule October 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
nice how your making things fall into place !!!! thank you for the update !!!!!!!