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by Sealpotter

person djaddict
schedule October 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm. I thought we would miss the mad dash of mayhem and destruction through the ministry this time but I can see the logic in remaining somewhat near the timeline Harry remembers.
The bargaining with Death really surprised me though, I didn't think that there would be any need what with his Augur powers and all but, it is good that he is NOT omnipotent. I like that he gets to keep the cloak though - he does doesn't he?

So the whole thing with Death using the cloak and going to the babies, making it possible for Harry & Draco able to live their lives and die peacefully together confused me a bit. Did Death go back in time to Harry and Draco in the womb? That is the only thing I can think of that makes sense to me. Otherwise, I was completely lost there.

I REALLY liked how they sent Sirius, Lucius and Severus to the infirmary sneakily. Brilliant!

I do hate you just a little (OK a LOT) for ending it where you did but I have hope to see more soon?!
person djaddict
schedule October 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So my vote for stories...

Amnesia (Obliviate) would probably kill me and make me cry, so I hope that one is not on the list next! :)

I would love to see Polyjuice Potion/Poison and Just a piece of Wood. Those two look really fascinating to me!
person staar
schedule October 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG another chapter that you had me all over the place !!!!!!!! Shit I really thought that Snape was a goner..... and Harry and Death man that was awesome !!!!!!! you have me at the edge of my chair here !!!! now again to wait !!!!!! Thank you for the update !!!! you know that when you finish this I know that I'll read all of it again see you !!!!!!
person delia cerrano
schedule October 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Definately not hohum! Very anxious to see how it all shakes out. I don't remember...why is Harry saving Ms Zambini? For his or Draco's feeling for Blaise?
person BAFan
schedule October 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 37

Ohmigosh! I wasn't expecting that! So Severus was portkeyed naked to Voldemort? That image would make me laugh, except that it's really not funny. Snape is completely defenseless. No wand, no clothing, and no way to contact Harry.
person Meechypoo64
schedule October 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! Neville truly gets justice for his parents torture. Harry makes incredible bargains with Death so that more than just he and Draco and truly enjoy their HEAs and if I read it right, Draco is pregnant! So much fun but sad to know its coming to the close.

~~ Meechy
person meechypoo
schedule October 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I was afraid this would happen. In Severus' rush to prove his love for Sirius, he forgot about the dark mark. Now Voldemort is using Severus to lure Sirius to the ministry. Let's just hope Harry can get there on time.

~~ Meechy
person staar
schedule October 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG you !!!!!!! I can't believe how Snape did it was so beautiful , that you had me crying here !!!!!! and THEN on their honeymoon you take Snape away like that...WHY WHY WHY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! now I'm going to go crazy waiting for your next update and BTW please don't kill him nononononononono !!!!
person djaddict
schedule October 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
LOVED the bonding! Totally romantic and so wonderful of Severus to go so far out of his comfort zone. And he's a dog too, fabulous!

If you heard a scream of anguish, that was me reaching the end of this chapter. I cannot believe how evil your muse is.

Sorry I missed commenting on the last few chapters. I did avidly read and enjoy.
person staar
schedule October 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
OMG you are so mean !!!!!!!! to leave it there I can't wait to see what Snape says.......so glad the the Vampire got his mate.,,.,,,, what happened to him, why was he in the hospital? hope to see you soon cause I'm going to go nut's here !!!!!!