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for Fate Falls

by Sealpotter

person djaddict
schedule January 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see a second chapter to this that I squealed outloud and scared people! Lol

Poor Harry never really gets a break does he? I am worried about how much of the "future" he is revealing but I really love the pace of the story so far.

I would love to see Snape move on and find happiness. He deserves it.

Eagerly anticipating more!
schedule January 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Pretty mellow reactions to the change in loyalties so far. Wonder when the crazy reactions are going to start coming out. Lol, hey, has to happen sometime, right? ^_^ Anyway, wonderful job. Loved the flashback in the astronomy tower and Harry's conflict over his connection to Draco. Looking forward to more. Keep up the good work!
person Meechypoo
schedule January 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Im glad Ron took it better than I hoped. While not thrilled....who would be at that amount of change... He still managed to do the right thing and give Draco a chance. The more Harry fills Draco in the easier it will be for them to get closer as each unveils the nastier sides of their backgrounds so as to break down illusions of what their life is really like.

Oh... And yeah, Snape definitely needs a love interest. I think since he was never really forgiven for his past by anyone directly, he never forgave himself and moved on. Therefore he kept the torch for Lily longer than he should have. Not sure who to pair him with without breaking someone else up and drastically changing attitudes, like Sirius'. That man "seriously" needed to grow up!

~~ Meechy
person Rosealynne
schedule January 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome job so far . Think Snape has been through enough pain new time line new love . Not saying he can't still love lily just not in same way. Keep up awesome job can't wait for ch3
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You've still got me under your spell! I can't wait to see where this leads!!!
schedule January 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Snape should find love again. Snape isn't stupid and even though he has all this regret and guilt... being a spy would make it impossible for him to fall in love with someone normally because either they would be a supporter for Voldemort and therefore against what he is working against or they would be against Voldemort and a weakness or in danger because of him. Either way he would not want to bring a person he cared about into his situation. And he died before he ever really got a chance to live.

If Voldemort is defeated earlier and without Severus being killed... then of course he deserves to find love. Not that he will go looking for it but he isn't a stupid man so if love finds him he will hold and protect it.
schedule January 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just ... wow. I have read a few Harry Potter fics where he goes back in time, but nothing like this. Bravo for originality! I am very excited to read the next chapter and hope to see it out soon. Very interested to see where you're going to take this. Keep up the amazing work ^_^
person BAFan
schedule January 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1

Very different take on a fairly common theme. I'm quite interested to see where you take this.
person Meechypoo64
schedule January 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
They always say the hindsight is 20/20 and here we get to see Harry correct some of the most painful and horrible mistakes of the past...or future! His interactions with everyone are definitely interesting and I can't wait to read more!

~~ Meechy
person Katniss Everdeen
schedule January 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like this and haven't read one quite like it so please continue. Great start!