rate_review Reviews

Ok, to me, the tuxes and dancing were a little OTT but sweet. The acceptance and small kiss in the chamber were perfection.

I am assuming Harry put the horcruxes down there for safekeeping?

More lovely interaction with Severus. I do enjoy it so much when their relationship is positive.

Can't wait for more!

Ch. 6

Lovely chapter! Harry is building more friendships, which is good. The scene with Snape was fascinating; I can't even imagine trying to do what Harry was describing, lol. Where did you get the pronunciation of "augur" from? Just curious, because three online dictionaries showed it with a hard "G" sound, rhyming it with lager. Maybe it's a regional thing, like "eether/eyether" for "either"?

i'm enjoying the balance the gift of the vision requires. Yes, he can save many lives and directly make the world a better place, but he's sacrificing another part of "just harry" as the price.

I look forward to more of this story.

chpt 1-6: Very very good. I'm hooked. Will continue reading for sure. I like a knowing powerful Harry. He is much more interesting...sexy...not being a boy with little knowledge or understanding of what goes on and often feeling sorry for himself or letting others choose his path or what he will know.

So, so many things to love in these two chapters!

Harry hugging Severus and him relenting a little in the end.

Sirius pulling Severus through and planting one on him.

Lucius' regard for Harry.

And that whole last scene was fabulous!

Loved!

Wow! You know... I lurk more then I review now a days. But this!!! I must have more!!!!

Wow, this chapter was AMAZING! I loved the part when they cast their Patronus and Harry's and Draco's were both lions, and how their Patronuses interacted. I didn't really expect that pull-through-the-floo-and-attack-Snape part with Sirius, lol, but that just makes me love it more. Love the unexpected, and it totally makes sense! I can't get over how much I enjoy this story. I bookmark each chapter as I read it so I can always go to that page and see if there's a Next Chapter on it. Keep up the good work ^_^

Oh! I forgot to add that I adore the new relationship dynamic between Severus, as a father figure, and Harry. Brilliant!

GAH, it's so AWESOME!!! And yes, three exclamation marks. The conversation between the Malfoys and Harry was wonderful and I love the significance you give to the coins. And Lucius! He actually bowed. Wow. Did not see that coming. I mean, I expected them to go over to Harry's side given Draco and Harry's connection, but I didn't think Lucius would take it in such a gracious manner and offer his loyalty like that, even if Harry doesn't know it. Oh, oh, and the part between Harry and Draco there at the end? Mmm-MM, I could just eat it up! So hot and yummy. Bravo! Looking forward with great anticipation to the next chapter ^_^

This is a unique piece. I like the passion in your characters and the pace of the story. It's moving along not too fast or too slow but just enough to keep it interesting and make your reader want more. I was surprised by the Severus/Sirius relationship but I loved Sirius' admission. That was brilliant.