rate_review Reviews

Fantastic fic!
But you forgot to publish the epilog!
Kisses and congrats!

just found this and read it straight through. i like it, i hope you don't take too long in writing out chapters. *laughs* i am greedy like that. *hands you scones*

I loved this chapter! Harry and Draco say their ILYs and Harry saved Draco, while Draco showed how much he can save Harry by providing him with a safe haven. Harry showing Draco his worst moment with Draco in his vision and Draco accepting that they are not those people was so touching, I sooo wanted to read the next two chapters but it's almost 2am here and I really, really need some sleep.

Guess I know what I'll be doing when I wake up!

~~ Meechy

Great chapter, chapter nine, since I'm not quite caught up yet :P Love the practice throwing off the imperious curse as well as Harry's and Draco's interaction - so cute! Interesting what he did to Crabbe, though I have to tell you I was cheering in my head, lol. Looking forward to reading chapter ten! Keep up the good work ^_^

I had a feeling that the "voice" would be the prior augur but missed the fact that the prior augur was Merlin. Lol

The whole scene, receiving the book, was very cool. The rune circle, the power and especially the bonding was beautiful and moving. I really love augur Harry and the fact that he is not "all knowing" all the time. That kind of characterization gets flat and boring in my opinion. *cough*Hermione*cough* lol

Nitpicky -- back up at the end of the ceremony/ritual when you talk about the power dying down and simmering, I had to read it a time or two because at first I thought you meant to say 'shimmering' at first. Maybe you might want to revise, I am not sure it is conveying what you want it to.

Just do you know, I did a little happy dance when I saw the update and even paused my replay of the Olympics to read. This is one of my favorite WIPs going right now.

Somwe gotmtomsee just how much Dumbledore loved and missed his sister and just exactly how much he regrets some of his past decisions. I worried for a moment that he would indeed touch the stone again, but thankfully Harry vanished the stone before he could. Draco and Harry's bonding was unexpected but simply a joy to know they can't be separated now! Sirius' reaction to their bonding should be interesting to say the least. I'm very much looking forward to the Christmas holidays spent a Grimauld Place, especially when the Malfoys and Severus show up!

~~ Meechy

Talk about intense there at the end! Love that bit with the darkness and the blue fire, the image in my mind from that ... just wow. Can't wait to see what develops from this. And sorry I've not been around, I've been rather sick the past little while. But I'm still here and still loving it!

Well, to me, if there is an orgasm -- it's sex. Lol

Albus Dumbledore (canon) frustrates me, which I am sure was one of J.K.'s goals for him as a character, to be enigmatic. But there are so many little things that he could have done to make things better for Harry without disrupting her storyline. Sigh. It has made me prefer Dumbledore bashing stories in some ways. To get to my point, I love this scene with Dumbledore where you can actually feel the weight of remorse and despair that he carries and how Harry handles him. Very nicely done.

I am really inappropriately excited when I see you have updated. :)

I have no idea why I didn't start reading this when it first came out, but I'm glad to start it now. The story is super intriguing.

Dammit, I had a feeling you would end it before he got the book. But there was a lot going on here so it is understandable.

That sex scene was a little stylized for me but was gorgeous and hot nonetheless. Those two are beautiful together.

I just love your characterization of Harry. The blending of young/old, knowledgeable and somewhat jaded/somewhat ignorant and naive, is very well done.

Eagerly awaiting more.

Nitpicky (lol) a few typing/spelling errors mainly in the first half but I am sure you will catch them on re-read.