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for Fate Falls

by Sealpotter

schedule June 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

ch 38: Glad Lucius is on thier side.  Go Bad Ass Teens!!!
Awesome bargain Harry made for the hallows

schedule June 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

ch 39: Glad Draco was able to help himself. Balance....

schedule June 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

ch 40: awww the first flutter. Glad Albus got a HEA.   oooh Harry and Blaise related; didn't see that one coming. 
What a wonderful boon to Hagrid.
Sweet end scene

schedule June 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

ch 41:  Think the story was awesome and different than most I'd read.  actual plot and not just smut for the sake of smut.....not that there is anything wrong with smut...:-D

Nice seeing all the families together.  Wow  I thought Hermione would make the werewolf charms.

Thank you for writing and sharing.

schedule June 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ch 42  Sweet outtake

schedule June 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM

ch 22: Harry needs to be able to reign in his temper a bit I think.  He is a good teacher though

schedule June 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ch 23: Rita Skeeter got off easy in the movies. Wow he was def generous to his "relatives". He's always been the forgiving type though.


Wow Remus....Never thought I'd say this, but he is really pathetic.  Glad Severus didn't let him go

schedule June 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM

ch 24:  So nice of him to help Petunia out.  The vampire thing was a cool addition.  Hope his trust in Madam B is well placed. 
Sounds like Ron is growing up.  Def a good strategist.  Great advice Draco gave Ron.

schedule June 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM

ch 25: lol for Harry and Snape's banter.  ooh a Triad with the twins and angelina....I like it. 
Hopefully the Lupin thing is resolved.  Harry needed the little breakdown after I think.

Wow  What a power show he gave.

schedule June 7, 2017 at 12:00 AM

ch 27:  ooh interesting gift he's been given by Gaia.  The goblin speech and Harry's words after are something those in the real world need to learn.
R and H are great helping Draco. Interesting meeting with Rita.  I can see Hermione creating an Honesty Quill