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by Sealpotter

person Meechypoo
schedule February 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
A very touching chapter. Kreacher's redemption is a long tme coming and now he can heal sooner than before. When Draco finds out about Harry's childhood he will want to rage and be saddended all at the same time. I'm glad that the Malfoys are going to apologize to the Weasleys. Maybe the feud can finally die and the two families will be able t work together to bring down Moldyshorts! Thank you for attempting to save the dragon at Gringotts!

PS - Who knew Severus would take such an active role and that Sirius wold gladly submit to him...a thought they might fight for dominance at least a little but Sirius has been pining after Severus for far too long.

~~ Meechy
person Something_Else
schedule February 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Just one bit struck me, for nitpicking, that is.
Andromeda's husbands name is Ted, not Tom.
Thought you should know.
Write more, please.


Bob
person djaddict
schedule February 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
\o/ Another new chapter!

Great Malfoy family interaction. Enjoying the use of augur powers but my evil side wishes for vengeance instead of justice or mercy. Just once please? Maybe Bellatrix since you were nice to Umbridge. Lol

One little wtf? moment... Troll made coveralls? Big, hulking, club-wielding, human eating trolls make things? Lol

Enjoyed
person ChaosLady
schedule February 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful update!
person djaddict
schedule February 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap that was really hot! Very nice imagery.

I did not mean to imply that your Harry was a know it all. He's not, this is very well done.

So much to love in this chapter. The scene in the hall with Severus and Sirius was epic. Harry and Draco's connection is magical (pun not intended). Too much more to mention.

Loving it!!
person djaddict
schedule February 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
A little nitpick ( thought you wouldn't have to suffer that this time, didn't you).

In the second to last chapter you used acertations, and I am not sure what word you meant to use there. Assertions possibly?
person delia cerrano
schedule February 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying it especially now that Draco and Harry are together and Harry is busy straightening things out. Reading about Severus and Sirius is great fun.
person ChaosLady
schedule February 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This story is wonderful, I spent all night reading it!
person Meechypoo
schedule February 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love how Harry is going to recruit Kreacher. Instead of simply forcing Kreacher to tell his sad tale, he will work on boosting his ego over caring for the House of Black. I can't wait until they send him after the sneak thief Mudungus for stealing his "responsibility" and last memory of Regulus! Undoubtably one of the best scenes in the book. Severus just attacked Sirius and left him a pile of goo. Those two or gong to burst into flames when they finally get together. I love that Draco is there to balance out Harry and has his own powers over the augur to make him equal. Unfortunately, that places a huge target on his back from Harry's enemies.

~~ Meechy
schedule February 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing story