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February 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
oh wormtail, you dirty rat, you are about to get yours. *hands you scones* i LOVE this story!
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February 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, so much deliciousness all in one chapter!! Severus stakes his claim on Sirius and I find it hilarious that Harry and Draco are informed immediately due to the very loud nature of Sirius when in the midst of pleasure! **smirking**
The gifts are lovely but Harry's are extraordinary! Unfortunately finding out the George was the " Elder" is horrifying. Harry definitely needs to prevent the final battle as losing his twin was devastating to everyone but had to feel like losing half your soul to George!
Kreature's gifts were the best. The removal of the portrait that will make everyone much happier and the capture of Pettigrew. It will help Harry towards his goals and finally allow Sirius to be free! I "siriusly" can't wait for the next chapter!
~~ Meechy
The gifts are lovely but Harry's are extraordinary! Unfortunately finding out the George was the " Elder" is horrifying. Harry definitely needs to prevent the final battle as losing his twin was devastating to everyone but had to feel like losing half your soul to George!
Kreature's gifts were the best. The removal of the portrait that will make everyone much happier and the capture of Pettigrew. It will help Harry towards his goals and finally allow Sirius to be free! I "siriusly" can't wait for the next chapter!
~~ Meechy
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February 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am sure that I will have more to say after I go back and re-read but please tell me we wil "see" what happened when Harry went and got the book!
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February 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Way to go Kreacher! That was Pettigrew, wasn't it? The sex scene between Severus and Sirius was hot. I love Draco and Harry's reaction to the fact they forgot to use silencing charms! It was disturbing that George went dark. Excellent update!
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February 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ewww! Pettigrew? Your story continues to surprise me...in a good way.
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February 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nit pick? About what? That was an absolutely delicious chapter. Severus claims Sirius and was sinful in his domination over their first sexual encounter. Christmas eve festivities were sweet and delightful. And finally, Draco gives everything to Harry and Harry relishes in becoming one with his true mate! Nothing to pick on here but the bones left I. The ashes of their passion!
~~ Meechy
~~ Meechy
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February 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ok.............. WOW! Speechless.
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That scene with Severus and Sirius was so so hot, you could have written "Bing, tiddle, tiddle, bong" for the next few paragraphs and I probably wouldn't have noticed!
That being said, that was a wonderfully written section.
Enjoyed the presents and the tree scene as well.
Harry and Draco reliving Harry's past Dursley Christmases was heartbreaking. And the sex was just as hot as your other pairing! I can really feel the emotion between them in your writing.
My one little nitpick is at the beginning of Severus and Sirius' encounter where you said Sirius whirled himself toward Severus. Whirled around is usually the phrase used.
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That scene with Severus and Sirius was so so hot, you could have written "Bing, tiddle, tiddle, bong" for the next few paragraphs and I probably wouldn't have noticed!
That being said, that was a wonderfully written section.
Enjoyed the presents and the tree scene as well.
Harry and Draco reliving Harry's past Dursley Christmases was heartbreaking. And the sex was just as hot as your other pairing! I can really feel the emotion between them in your writing.
My one little nitpick is at the beginning of Severus and Sirius' encounter where you said Sirius whirled himself toward Severus. Whirled around is usually the phrase used.
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February 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was perfect and the sex scenes hot and sweet(like chocolate syrup).
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February 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That's amazing story . I really like it no I love it . *huge grin*
That's very complicated story yet is easy to read . When you will update ?! It's that need long time ?? Well, i like the idea 'bout Siri and Sev . They will cute together . Hmmm , i want be more seeing elder Malfoys become open . Maybe more time with Harry n Draco alone ?! And Will Harry will have his child ?? That's one Harry happinies though . I want Harry more happies . He deserve it . And thank you .
That's very complicated story yet is easy to read . When you will update ?! It's that need long time ?? Well, i like the idea 'bout Siri and Sev . They will cute together . Hmmm , i want be more seeing elder Malfoys become open . Maybe more time with Harry n Draco alone ?! And Will Harry will have his child ?? That's one Harry happinies though . I want Harry more happies . He deserve it . And thank you .
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February 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Still not caught up yet. Just finished reading Ch. 10. I think you portrayed that part with Dumbledore and the ring quite well. There would be a lot of temptation involved in that. Thank goodness Harry was there :) Still loving what I'm reading and can't wait to read more. Keep writing!