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Wow this story is absolutely wonderful. Please keep me updated when you add another chapter and the rest of your stories. Wow I am in awe. My email address is Michaelle_Torchon@yahoo.com

Ch. 15

"'Adding permanent silencing charms on all the rooms.' Harry replied with a grin that grew larger with the deepness of the blush sweeping over his godfather. Severus did not hesitate, and his expression remained as flaccid as ever when he responded. Inside though, he was enjoying the deep color washing his lover."

I'm pretty sure you meant "placid," meaning calm, not "flaccid," which means soft or flabby. Harry was evil, teasing Sirius like that. I mean, come on, that was some pretty hot sex, if a bit rough for my tastes.

Good chapter!

Ch. 16

Whew. Peter's fate was pretty horrific. I'm surprised only Harry got sick; pretty sure I would have been puking in the bushes. The real question is whether Fudge will believe the witnesses, since they're all friends of Harry. At least, I assume they're still trying to clear Sirius's name?

"'Every now and then, old thoughts seep in for what he once was. Forgive me.' Severus condoled." I don't think "condoled" is the word you want. It means to offer sympathy, which doesn't seem to fit the context of what's happening. If anything Snape was apologizing for reverting back to his old habit of sneering at Harry's actions. Or did I totally misread that part?

Anyway, another good chapter. And I'm off to the next one!

Ch. 17

So much happened in this chapter that I'm having trouble remembering it all! Lucius now knows exactly what Harry went through in the Chamber and Ginny has forgiven him;that's good. Albus and Aberforth returned from their forced holiday and are friends again. Er, brothers, I mean. Harry fooled Voldemort and saved a woman's life; that's best of all. So, yeah, another good chapter!

Wow! That was a truly powerful scene. Very beautiful way to absolve both of the brothers.

I am enjoying the evolution of Lucius very much. His reaction to the memory and his personal revelations show a very believeable change is his fundamental beliefs.

Severus and Sirius are hot and perfect as always. Really love them together!!

You gave Harry and Draco their adult bodies! Lol. Much better than the 15 year old ones to picture!

Nitpicky - left the e off of breathe once in the scene with S/S but it was just typing error because you had it later in same paragraph. ( One of my personal pet peeves. Lol)

Can't wait for more but now I am scared of Chap. 19. Teehee.

Well I never thought of that solution to which killed Ariana. Good one! Harry gets worn down easily huh? Good thing Draco's around but this time it wore both out. What will happen next time?

Lucius was absolutely devastated to really feel what Harry and Ginny went through because of his own actions. Ginny is true a wonderful person to see his true remorse and find forgiveness for him. Draco wants again lends Harry is strength and magic so that Harry cold in turn defend Severus and Lucius. I'm so glad he was able to intervene so that neither man would have to sully the soul even more. I was most moved though by Sirius showing Severus that he could let go and be the true dominant without worrying about hurting Sirius. The depth of emotion was truly felt between both men. Bravo. I laughed and then cried when Dumbledore came back frm Bermuda. Laughing at how Harry forced them to get pat their anger and cried to know that their sister sacrificed herself so that the brothers would stop fighting. She felt it was the only way for everyone to find peace. Maybe now they can truly move on and be family again.

~~ Meechy

Well... now I see why you split Christmas day into multiple chapters. Yes, Harry's days are very long.

It seems that justice for some people will be harsher than others. Actually a little more horrific than I thought you would get but seriously deserved. I had thought that he might use him to clear Sirius' name but I am sure there is a plan for that. Right?

Wish we could have lingered in the afterglow with Harry and Draco but when they come together like that ( pun not intended) it is just so moving, beautiful and hot.

I like that Harry pointed out to Severus that the darkness inside of him is not necessasarily a bad thing.

You had a typo in the author's note, lol, anticipated.

So Peter is punished in a way only known bu Augurs and though witnessed is still a terrible burden to be beared by Harry. One can see just how important Draco is to Harry in anchoring him to a calmer reality when his gifts overwhelm him and ask more of him than can normally be tolerated. Christmas was still al lovely affair and Severus is coming to understand the depths of the emotion he feels for Sirius and that Sirius already acknowledges in himself. Lucius' apology was in expected but welcomes but the horror of the basilisk will make his guilt rise to new heights. I love that Harry gave Molly a house elf! Brilliant.

~~ Meechy

So much to love in this chapter.

I love how Draco was THERE for Harry when he needed him most.

Severus and Sirius were hotter than hot and I just love your characterization of Severus and his dominance.

Harry's vision of the tree was facinating. Is that going to come up again?

The presents were great, Kreatcher's especially.

I still want to know what happened with Harry when he left to study the book!

No nitpicks this time... I must be slipping. lol

I love that you like the bing, tiddle thing but I can't take credit. Stolen fron Dr. Rodney McKay and Stargate Atlantis. Lol