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Nope, still traumatized. Can't think.

However, the image of Snape staring dumbfounded at his patronus being Sirius was priceless. And the two of them were smoking hot as usual.

I hope the next chapter comes quick!

Still think you are evil

Harry was able to rescue Draco but the event will forever be marked on their souls. Harry's guilt will be everlasting but Draco will help temper that by loving him. I was amazed at the depth of their feelings and in awe of the bond they share. So moved that Harry allowed himself to be truly connected to Draco by letting Draco take him and show Draco that he is his in every way and that Draco is truly his own savior and guide. Heart wrenching but beautiful chapter.

~~ Meechy

I hate you so much right now!

Love you for updating but you are so mean to poor Draco, not to mention your faithful readers!

More after I recover. I need chocolate.

The horcruxes are destroyed and Harry felt their destruction as his own piece of Voldemort cried out to its brethren. Watching Harry die will be excruciating to Saco and openly he will remember Harry's words well and get through it without to much heartache. Severus submitted to Sirius in the only manner he could by providing Sirius with all of the pleasure in a most vunerable way. I'm glad he was ale to finally give in to his heart and proclaim his ILY. By doing so it will help mend the broken heart he had over Lily all these years. Harry and Draco getting to live out a teenaged fantasy was certainly sexy, hot and enjoyable but knowing that Draco is being tortured is torture to us as we now have to wait for another chapter. Based upon your prelude to the next one, I don't think it will be a pretty end to Amycus and even Vincent! Wonder what Voldemort will say now?

Please don't keep us waiting too long. I don't think my heart can stand it.


~~ Meechy

After what Harry saw,how could he be stupid enough to let Draco out of his sight? I can't forgive him for letting that happen to Draco. I was enjoying this story,now I don't think so.

Oh holy moly!!! They've got to find him!!!!

I look for this everyday! Always want more!!! I love the relationship between H/D and SS/SB.

Perfect!!!! I love H/D!!!

Happy sigh.

I enjoy how each little thing that we learn about Harry and his new powers fits together like jigsaw pieces and just hint at the future whole picture.

Severus and Sirius are "beyond my ability to think" hot, hot, hot! I keep thinking that each sex scene with them couldn't get any hotter and then you go and prove me wrong!

Really love the character and relationship development here with all of the characters.

Great update - really enjoyed!!!!

Nitpicky stuff, I think I have too much time on my hands, lol:

Some little word choices stuff---

(During his encounter with Merlin) You as a son of the earth will bare the strength... "bear"

(Sirius to Harry, scene right after the vision with Merlin) ...and when your gone, well there is nothing left. "you're"

(Draco to Harry, scene after Severus/Sirius sex scene) I wonder if there is a spousal tutoring program aloud. "allowed"

(In the beginning of Harry's testing) Harry had to gain only the defense certificate, but allowed he the Ministry to test all teaching areas. I don't think the second half of that sentence is structured how you want it to be.

(Just before Severus tries to crucio Harry in the test) Severus whispered to the dog which wined next to him. "whined"

And you seem to have been awfully fond of commas in this chapter. I think you over used it a bit, especially in the first half of the chapter, and things are not reading as smoothly because of it.

This is a very interesting fic. An interesting twist on the "Fix-it" fics that usually involve time-travel. Look forward to more.