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March 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 21
Morganabythesea in her review on 3/22 said: "...There is something with the margins or some other problem that keeps me from being able to increase the font size, which is making it very difficult to read...."
I have this problem periodically, but I figured it was a Kindle issue as I do 90% of my reading on my Kindle Fire HD. What's really weird is when, as in this chapter, the Disclaimer and Author Notes will enlarge but the body of the story won't - EXCEPT for Harry's visions (in this chapter), which were beautifully legible. The two chapters after this one I had no trouble enlarging. Is a puzzlement! :-)
Speaking of Harry's vision (in order to have this "review" be somewhat relevant), I'm quite curious to see just what fate - or Death, I guess - has in mind for Vincent.
Morganabythesea in her review on 3/22 said: "...There is something with the margins or some other problem that keeps me from being able to increase the font size, which is making it very difficult to read...."
I have this problem periodically, but I figured it was a Kindle issue as I do 90% of my reading on my Kindle Fire HD. What's really weird is when, as in this chapter, the Disclaimer and Author Notes will enlarge but the body of the story won't - EXCEPT for Harry's visions (in this chapter), which were beautifully legible. The two chapters after this one I had no trouble enlarging. Is a puzzlement! :-)
Speaking of Harry's vision (in order to have this "review" be somewhat relevant), I'm quite curious to see just what fate - or Death, I guess - has in mind for Vincent.
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March 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 22
I liked this chapter but found myself confused by some parts, Harry's defense of Trelawney being the main one. That really surprised me. Was his change of mind towards her mentioned before and I just forgot? (Which is quite possible!) Though, now that I think about it, I'm not sure whether Harry's disdain for her is canon or fanon. It's been too many years since I last read the books.
"The flowers all leaned in her direction, and her hands swept across them. With the right ears, a sigh of love could be heard." Ahh. I like that imagery!
A couple of corrections:
"Harry stood, almost livid
I liked this chapter but found myself confused by some parts, Harry's defense of Trelawney being the main one. That really surprised me. Was his change of mind towards her mentioned before and I just forgot? (Which is quite possible!) Though, now that I think about it, I'm not sure whether Harry's disdain for her is canon or fanon. It's been too many years since I last read the books.
"The flowers all leaned in her direction, and her hands swept across them. With the right ears, a sigh of love could be heard." Ahh. I like that imagery!
A couple of corrections:
"Harry stood, almost livid
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March 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i so can't wait to see how the next chapters go! *hands you scones and bounces around*
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March 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What a great chapter! Especially loved the very sexy and romantic Severus and Sirius. So now Draco knows Harry was married to Ginny in the what...other world? possible future? But he to was reassured he - Draco - was the special and only one. Also so very romantic.
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March 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
An exciting update! And the next one promises to be even more so! Update soon!
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March 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
In response to your Author's note: Ah! "If you don't like the weather wait five minutes." Storms can come up suddenly.
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March 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really like the interaction with Madam Bones in Harry's first class. I think he is giving her just enough info to make her intrigued. I love his ideas and how he is presenting himself and the information to the students.
Ok, I admit to being really tired (cause I am working 12 hour days, 6 days a week right now) but I don't get the thing with Fred and George. Will you be enlightening the stupid (me) later? Because, I read it over a few times and I still don't get it. Does this mean Fred will still die? {Whimpers}
His defense of Trelawney initially surprised me but then it made sense as the scene went on. I liked the reading. And she almost made a huge mistake but I like her strategic retreat. I knew she was smart.
Hey, cool!! A scene inspired by me?? You know I will spend all day trying to figure out which one and why. lol
I definitely have mixed feelings about Remus. In canon, there are so many things he could have done differently but I guess JKR wanted him wishy-washy. I think he is just jealous and so mired in his misery that he wanted Sirius to be stuck there too. So glad Severus didn't back off, I am loving his character development!!! He really is so believable.
The information about the Dursley's from the vision kind of surprised me. You mean to tell me that there are women who would sleep with Vernon Dursley voluntarily?!?!?!?!?!?! Not really surprised that he is apparently going to save them though. That is the kind of person Harry is.
I really can't wait for the next chapter and to see how Harry "reveals his power" to Moldyshorts.
Nitpicks ('cause I know you missed them, lol): Ch22
"Her energy of life and torment was unmistakable." Not sure if torment is the word to use here.
Ok, I admit to being really tired (cause I am working 12 hour days, 6 days a week right now) but I don't get the thing with Fred and George. Will you be enlightening the stupid (me) later? Because, I read it over a few times and I still don't get it. Does this mean Fred will still die? {Whimpers}
His defense of Trelawney initially surprised me but then it made sense as the scene went on. I liked the reading. And she almost made a huge mistake but I like her strategic retreat. I knew she was smart.
Hey, cool!! A scene inspired by me?? You know I will spend all day trying to figure out which one and why. lol
I definitely have mixed feelings about Remus. In canon, there are so many things he could have done differently but I guess JKR wanted him wishy-washy. I think he is just jealous and so mired in his misery that he wanted Sirius to be stuck there too. So glad Severus didn't back off, I am loving his character development!!! He really is so believable.
The information about the Dursley's from the vision kind of surprised me. You mean to tell me that there are women who would sleep with Vernon Dursley voluntarily?!?!?!?!?!?! Not really surprised that he is apparently going to save them though. That is the kind of person Harry is.
I really can't wait for the next chapter and to see how Harry "reveals his power" to Moldyshorts.
Nitpicks ('cause I know you missed them, lol): Ch22
"Her energy of life and torment was unmistakable." Not sure if torment is the word to use here.
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March 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I just found your delightful story yesterday and as I've been reading through one thing has bothered me and while I've only skimmed your review replies I don't believe I've seen it mentioned ... Myrtle's bathroom is on the second floor. Sorry a little thing but its driving me mad :)
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March 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter. I'm very curious to see how Madam Bones will play out in this story.
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March 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Harry's emotions do seem to whipsaw some.