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That whole "magic-weaving" thing was really cool! Can't wait to see where the power to see magic is really needed. Not that brining both of them off wasn't necessary. lol

The only good Fudge is the one I make at Christmas. (rubs hands together in anticipatory glee)

Nit-pick - possessive of Bones should be Bones' not Bone's. :)

Oops! Missed a question.
So Pansy mentioned Blaise's mother. Does this mean that no one else knows that she is dead?

Things are starting to fall into place. I'm proud of Severus and his want to prove to Sirius the "seriousness" of his commitment. Sorry couldn't help myself. Harry finds a new way to give Draco pleasure and to see magic in a new way and Harry's plans came color to fulfillment. I can't wait to see Fudge's reaction to the Wizangamot finding out about him citing an unforgivable in an attempt to discredit Harry and control the press! Should be fun.

~~ Meechy

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!! Cliffie?

You evil, evil author. Lol

Poor Blaise. But I suppose it was necessary?

I want Fudge to suffer humiliations galore (gratuitous guess the movie reference)

I am sure that the issue with manipulating time will come up and poor Harry will suffer for it.

Must have more!,

Another well written chapter, love the way this is progressing, what will be next!!

wow I wonder what the headmaster will do now....so sad that Blaise's mom had to die....thanks for the update see ya soon !!!!!!!!

Poor Blaise! His mother was doomed as soon as she penned the later telling him not to come home. I really love the Severus/Sirius portion of this story. They're both so damaged in someway but have the strength that they need to properly comfort and love the other. They really are two sides of a coin. I'm thinking that Harry may have secreted Grindlewald away and now Dumbledore too can disappear to find the love he once had, this time without interference. I'm sure Harry will have to ensure Grindlewald's sanity but it gives Dumbledore a choice for happiness that he would not have otherwise. What will he choose this time?

~~ Meechy

Yeah!! Two chappies to love!

Severus and Sirius are just such a great couple in this story. I love their interaction and Severus' thought processes.

I thought all of the talks that Harry arranged were great and should have given the listeners more insight into the various magical creatures.

I am afraid that these few chapters have just raised more and more questions for me, which I am sure is your goal. What is it Harry needs to learn about Tom? What is the minister going to accomplish? What is going to happen in the Vince/Minister/Voldie plot? Are we going to see another Auger "judgment" soon? Is Sanguini going to go kidnap Lockhart from St. Mungos? Will Snape ever get to quit spying? Soooo many questions! I really love this story!

Now for my nitpicks, lol. Which I know you have missed. (Sure, right?) I'm giving you whole passages so you can find easier where I am talking about.

1. [His reached around and tightened his grip on Draco and they lay together, breathing each other and soaking up the wonder of their love.]

He instead of His.


2. Harry to Albus [

Lots going on in this chapter. Harry and Draco spend a little time giving in to their passion whilst Harry work to uncover an important aspect of Tom's psyche. Too bad he's twisted beyond repair, I wouldn't want to have to spend anytime in that mind. It surely must leave you feeling somewhat slimy. Severus is pondering a romantic gesture so he's a little out of his element. Finally, Voldemort thinks he's in control of all of the players but he doesn't understand fate holds all the car and she's dealt Harry the winning hand. Boy is he in for a rude awakening.

~~ Meechy

New to your story !!! Been reading for 2 days and can I say that I love it....Another new twist to the story of coming back to fix things!!!!! love it !!!!!! man I can't wait till you update again....you have me so hooked.....waiting for the main wvwnt is killing me !!!!!!!! hope to see you sooner than later :):)::):)