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for Break the Silence

by KohakuShadow

schedule January 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
holy fuck this was brilliant, and hot and sexy
person delia_cerrano
schedule May 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful wonderful wonderful as sex and as deep love honed over many years of trials and hurts. Love your take on Severus and Harry...more please.
person ChelseaPlume
schedule January 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! Wonderful! Tender and touching, and quite amusing when they were confronting each other, and then undeniably sexy there at the end...the two of them completely and utterly hot together in their mutual need. Thanks for a great, great story. I loved reading it.
person VSBree
schedule January 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was an amazingly written one shot. It was sexy, witty, and had me laughing a good bit of the way. I really did enjoy it thoroughly *wink wink*
person BAFan
schedule January 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this a lot. I like the sly, subtle humor, such as the chance to audition/underwheming number of applicants scene, and the sex scene is quite hot. I did notice some errors, "libel" when it should be "liable" and confusing legilimency and occlumency, but overall this was well-written. As I said before, I liked it!
person delia cerrano
schedule January 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
My favorite m/m couple...Harry/Severus! Your plots are so surprising to me and yet seem so possible. Great job for sure...more please, many more.