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for To Protect

by VSBree

person ChaosLady
schedule January 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was hot!
person Evanna Von
schedule January 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh... I'm so happy they finally talked about it and solved it. And they are together now, yeah!
I love read the story, you write in an absolutely amazing way, thank you for that!
Loking forward forthe next chapters! <3
person ChaosLady
schedule January 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Despite the fact that Hermione pointed out in her letter that Harry and Snape were not teenagers, some of their interactions reminds me of that dating-for-the-first-time awkwardness that most of us experience at teenagers.Excellent update.
person ChaosLady
schedule January 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
qwerty's theory has occurred to me too. Or at least the last sentence
person snape_lust
schedule January 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
woah...i'll be honest, for the first 3 chapters i was conviced this is all some sort of plot on severus' part, but I couldn't figure out the angle. I'm still not totally convinced that there is a huge something you haven't revealed yet.

anyhoo, i'm digging this story and look forward to more.
person Becky
schedule January 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
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person qwerty
schedule January 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, now I don't know what to believe! Could Henry be pointing fingers at Severus to throw off Harry or does he really believe it could be Severus? Does Severus and Henry believe each other to be a threat because they secretly both like Harry and don't want any competition? Intriguing....

Also, feel better soon!
person Leania07
schedule January 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
AAAHHHHH!!! *Grabs a tissue* Okay so getting me to admit to being teary is a good thing; I cry at the simplest things, but only admit to it if it's good enough. I want to strangle Severus, and as he's my absolute favorite, that's saying something. Obviously it wouldn't be Severus who's the assassin, as he's had all this time to do so when everyone would be less suspicious. Henry, well I don't want him to be the culprit, only because I want Harry's instincts to be right and prove to Severus that one can trust another even after being betrayed, and not everyone will betray you. However that leaves who will be the culprit. Should we bring back one of his classmates, who was using a house elf or some other method? Or are you *gasp* using Severus and having him create this farce to get Harry for himself? Oh I hope not, Harry wouldn't like him much for that, especially if he was planning on Henry being his scapegoat. I'm not a fan of unhappy endings, while I don't mind angst and such in the story, I'd rather have the ending happy.

Can't wait to read more!

Leania
person ChaosLady
schedule January 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
On one hand, if Henry was the traitor he would not of mentioned Harry's fragmented wards, if he was the one to destroy them or the poisoned glass. On the other hand, if what Severus says is true and Harry's face is an open book, then Henry could have seen that Harry was starting to grow suspicious and decided to divert suspicion to Severus, not knowing that Severus had already told Harry of his suspicions of Henry.
person ChaosLady
schedule January 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
As you can tell I'm of two minds about it.