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for To Protect

by VSBree

person L
schedule February 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I kept seeing this story, but I haven't read it... until tonight. I was hooked and read the entire thing through! I loved it!

I tend to dislike Severus/Harry fics, because I don't feel most authors can make them believable as a couple. You did very well in making them work!

You also handled some serious dark subject matter very well. It was sad, but made sense that people would react the ways they did.

I can't wait to see what you write next!
person Meechypoo
schedule February 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story and though sad that Draco's jealousy would take him to such extremes, I am glad that Severus and Harry have found their happiness. I can't wait until your next story.

~~ Meechy
person ChaosLady
schedule February 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was a nice ending, it's been fun.
person delia cerrano
schedule February 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to see the finish of this story. It was certainly a shock to read Draco being the really bad guy! Glad you are all set to write another Severus and Harry story. My favorite kind.
person tinkerbabe7
schedule February 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Soooooooo sad it's finished but I LOVED it all the same!
I love Snarry.
I can't wait for your next story :D
person Marron
schedule February 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
How sad. But a good chapter. I hope Severus will visit Draco and kick his ass.
person Madamdragon
schedule February 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love the name. Noah. Nice love it. You made a good choice on the name. Hope more is to com soon and a happy ending for all and why draco did it?
person Meechypoo
schedule February 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
As hard as it was to read about Hermione losing her child, I can't imagine the heartbreak it would be to actually lose one in real life. Survivor's guilt is a real thing and Harry's devastation that he still,had his child when Hermione did not is exactly what one would picture from Harry. I'm glad that Hermione and Ron had some time to themselves to work through the grief but overjoyed that she's expecting again. While it won't replace there little lost Hope, he will go a long way to helping them heal. I can't wait for Harry's son to be born and to find out what drive Draco to such depths. My personal gut feelings are that he is in love with Severus and feels betrayed or he simply could be looking for a way to get back st Harry for his father's death. Only you know his real reasons and we shall have to wait until you deem it time for us to know.

~~ Meechy
person djaddict
schedule February 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yes, that was a hard chapter to read as well. Dammit.

I am dying to know if and why Draco was really involved. I hope you will tell us!!!
person djaddict
schedule February 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You. Are. Evil.