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crazy about the way they are together (Daddy/my good boy...lovers/parent & child). Maybe I'm slow but still figuring out what's going on with the rest of the people except Draco. I know he's on their side as is Lucius. Can't wait for the attorney to start churning up the waters!

Another wonderful chapter; I love how you're bringing out Sev's softer, protective side in this story. I must admit, the whole "Daddy" thing unsettles me a bit, but I'm dealing with it fine so far. Some things I can just 'ignore' in my mid to keep reading the story. This chapter seemed a bit short, but that could just be me. Keep up the good work, I look forward to the next chapter. Oh, before I forget, found a misspelled word in Chapter Four, the smut scene.
" Arousal began to fool in his belly and he could feel Severus being affected as well." You have fool instead of pool. Really, I missed it the first time through and only when I re-read to familiarize myself back to where I was, did I catch it.

Leania

My email is savannah19742001@yahoo.com ... I really like how warm Sanpe is being to Harry. I can't wait to read more.

love the story

Getting a kick out of this story! Never liked or trusted Dumbledore and always liked Severus and Harry as a pair. Both had bad childhoods both were extra smart and loyal to those they chose to be their special people. Harry always seemed more mature because of the life he's led.

I love stories where the Malfoys are good and also Snarry, so I'm looking forward to how this progresses.

Love how its going so far when u update email me if you can

Really like this story! How often do you update?

I love this fic so much. It's well written and in the style of SpeedyTomato. Also like SpeedyTomato, you don't update fast enough! Please I need moar!


-Spider

More please, this is a good start.