rate_review Reviews

Please continue 

Checking into the story again...lets go Author! Another chapter please. It started out so good. I was anxious to read what happened when Severus discovered that Harry was a cutter and self hurter.

oh sad, gloom, hurting chapter. I hope Harry and Severus start talking & Sev figures out that something really serious is going on that he will help him with. This is after the war right? All the planning and running, hiding and guilt over what he did & what he thinks he should have been able to do is over & now he has time to think of it all...too much time...too much everything. Maybe he's overwhelmed and just needs quiet time to let everything settle and work its' way through but with a quiet smart person to kind of keep him safely directed forward.

Chpts 2-3: Still keeping me reading. But I want Severus to realize something is really really wrong. I know he kinda does but I mean seriously wrong. Love that couple.

Ch. 1

Very intriguing start.

Ch. 3

It's a little hard to point out what might be missing or wrong when we don't know what the overall story is. So far we're still trying to figure out just what's going on, but since that's the way you've written it, with each chapter explaining a bit more, I don't imagine you'll be changing that.

I think this is going well. Looking forward to the next update.

Still not sure what is going on with Harry but I sure hope Severus finds out about his cutting REAL soon! Accidental magic?
Hmmm Harry seems kind of a bad guy in this one.

Very well done war story chapter. Looking out for more.