AFF Fiction Portal
person Tannara
schedule July 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love the story!! IF anyone could make Loki "behave" (like that would ever happen *smirk*) it would be Hermione!! :) Ever thought of an Epilogue? Would a bit of begging help? :) Would love to find out if your muse would allow Loki to come back and learn that he's a father! :) Please please please?!?! :)
person Aurora Lancy
schedule February 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Honestly? You leave it like that?
Like hell you do!!!
Please! Pretty please ith cream on top!
I want this sequel.
Hermione is with Lokis child there just HAS to be sequel right?
You will do one, right?
Of course I'm right, you can't let us down..., can you?
person LDeetz
schedule February 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Gods Yes! Please make a sequel asap! Sorry but I'm in love with this story and pairing!!!
person Silver1
schedule February 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Arrgh! Bad bad cliffie!!! I do like the way you wrote this pairing; and also the way Loki was dealing with hiding out with Hermione. I vote for a sequel ASAP please!!! Beside the fact that it would not be fair to your readers - or Hermione- Loki should know that she's pregnant. Or is this an excuse for Odin to try and get rid of her as he did Freya. BTW are you going to have a reason for that in the sequel? Please, please write a sequel soonest!
person britt
schedule February 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i truly hope you write a second part, because i reeeeeally want to know what happens with loki and hermiones baby.... and of course what happes on asgard. please write more! this was awesome!!!!!
schedule February 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That cliffhanger was Just wrong. Please make a sequel the story doesn't feel complete without it
person lucky
schedule February 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please make the sequel. You just can't leave me hanging like this.
person Katlin Malfoy
schedule February 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I hate you you cant leave it like this yo u will v give me headaches :( I'll cry if 8 don't know what happens I'll cry you don't want to see me cry do you btw ★★★★ four stars I felt it was rushed not much background info, and that it was just straight to the point
person Anon
schedule February 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please please please write some more :) it's such a cruel cliff hanger
schedule February 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
1. she better throw that potion out. Or at Snape's picture, either works, two you are an evil evil evil person and there better be another story! lol. Please?