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Just started reading this story.
Harry must be extremely pissed that he got hoodwinked so soon after defeating Lord Voldemort, but I could totally see that happening with that dick Fudge prancing around. I never really considered a story with Harry and Loki as a pairing, I have to admit I'm interested since I adore them separately -I'm sure to love them together.
Nice plan laid out, handing over Harry with a proposition of alliance. I wonder if the Wizarding World will think Fudge is soft for relying on a muggle agency to kept Harry locked up? I'm sure I'll find out if I keep reading. :P

I really enjoy this story and can't wait for the next chapter!!

I like how you're making the situation really casual between Harry and Loki. I enjoy the little funny parts too. I think Harry needs to introduce Loki to some Marauder pranks, no? hehe.
Is Hermione moving in? Is Harry settling down?
That's the vibe going on, but I haven't heard any, "You're staying here with us." announcement.
I wonder what's happening with the SHIELD, seems they might be stressed loosing a national terrorist which can lead to the ministry turning on them.
I'm also wondering if there is going to be a new threat. Everything seems to 'peachy', but everyone's looking for a villain somewhere.
Eh, maybe I'm not making any sense.
Keep up the good work! Type, type, type!

i think the bonding time was wisely done. thank you for the new chapter!

Being National Pi month, bonding over pie is required.

I enjoyed the bonding time. Sometimes we need a baseline of character interaction and those little moments to clue us in! I really liked Steve's blush and the part about Tony getting chased by Pepper out of his lab! Excellent character building.

Sqweeeee! OMG this is just too awesome. LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! The interactions are perfect and just too cute that Steve is already crushing on Hermine. And with Loki and Harry being soo adorable together. Can't wait for more chapters. ^_^

this has got to be one of the better written, non Gary Stu 'betrayed harry' stories i've read so far. I'm really, really wishing you also wrote on FF.com or AFF had a Fave option cause i do NOT want to lose track of this story. I don't suppose you do update alerts? i'm ckestra@hotmail.com if u want to drop me a line.

Another good chapter! I like the bit of teasing and such, it was sweet. Seemed a bit short, but I'm guessing the next chapter will be longer? I don't know when it was set, I'm guessing early 2000 time frame, but I could be wrong. I look forward to the next chapter, I feel now that Hermione is there, momentum will go.

Leania

*cackles* Only Loki would like someone who had just basically threatened his life. XD Hermine is awesome though, but i doubt she'd put up with Tony's crap since he sees himself as a playboy. lol Steve on the other hand would be perfect for her, he's old fashioned, polite and sweet. Can't wait to see how this plays out. Whoot! ^_^