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A light and lovely tease of a fic! Much like this D/Hr encounter itself. What I'm noticing most of all is the deliciously detailed description, with good use of all five senses - especially while Hermione is blindfolded and you convey so much passion through touch, taste, scent, and sound. A very attractive dominant!Draco. Love how he fakes the walkout and makes her properly sorry for talking back. "Her desperation was blatant. Her need. Her desire." Nicely written moment of vulnerability there, feels very real. And the sex that follows is great too - especially hot when she's grinding down on him and he grabs her hips to go harder. Good to see both of them so happy and satisfied at the end!

This is an interesting story. You make it sound so real. I was feeling like I was right there. The only problem is that the story is repeated on the page not sure if you meant to. Look forward to other stories from you it was highly entertaining.

Well...that was a HOT little game. Definitely a teaser. I hope that you write more!!!