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for Harry Potter and the wizarding world

by zoy_grey

person Mimi
schedule January 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I really like this story and I was wondering if you would continue it?

schedule December 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story! It's interesting to see Harry change slowly and become his own person instead of the headmaster's good little puppet. I can't wait for the next chapter!
person staar
schedule December 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love your twist to the story !!!!! OMG can't wait for MORE !!!!!!!!! Hope Harry can get back to everyone that has lied to him (headmaster )!!!!!
person Sergej
schedule November 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Now that's a really interesting story. I'm looking forward to your next update!
person delia cerrano
schedule July 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is way different to the usual story...3 types of magic, Voldemort not wanting to kill him right away, etc. Enjoying it and trying to figure out who he will end up paired with. Draco or Severus are always my favorite choices.
schedule June 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. Can't wait for more!
person BAFan
schedule April 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 7

Whoa. Excitement galore! So if Snape isn't Shadow, who is???
person BAFan
schedule April 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 5

Very sad. Dumbledore and the Light seem to be winning. At least, I assume that's the meaning behind the white cloak! Good job with the symbolism.

I've noticed one consistent error in these chapters: it's "literally," not literary - unless you're referring to books.
person delia cerrano
schedule April 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm sooo glad that at last Harry is finding out some things. Also that he might be more friendly with Snape now that more things are out in the open. I think that the mystery black cloaked figure most be Snape getting meds into the students that were taking a potion from Pompey. I think knowing or not she was giving them something to squash there magic ability...most probably at Dumbledore's order.
person delia cerrano
schedule March 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapters! I cannot imagine what that figure and dream are all about. I wonder why we have some O.C. characters
I wonder how they are connected to Harry ...especially the two girls.