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for Toonie\'s Love

by SpeedyTomato

person snape_lust
schedule February 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
yay, a new update!!! I look forward to how the members of the order take to PJ. I really hope that PJ moving in is the extent of his involvement. I love seeing PJ standing firm and i hope to see that continue, in particular with albus and the war. for once, please have albus and the order not get what they want. I really enjoy seeing events unfold from PJ's bystander/reporter POV (i haven't read any stories in fact with this perspective) and that can't happen if he gets involved in the events. Ok, done with my begging on future story lines and acknowledge that it's the height of presumptuousness for me to even beg/demand the story go they way I want, so forgive me.
person tabEkat
schedule February 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Though I don't know much about where your plotline is going, I can't help wondering why PJ didn't consider bringing Sirius to Switzerland with him; unless the thought was discarded because he knew of Sirius' views on the war. Obviously your story is on another thread entirely. I am looking forward to the ride.
person Jan
schedule January 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
An interesting start can't wait for chapter 3
person BAFan
schedule January 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 2

Well hell. Reading the first chapter, I was really enjoying how different this is from your usual fics. I mean, a nice, caring Petunia? Can't remember when I last ran across that! But now there's this complication with Harry and Sirius, and I'm really hoping it doesn't screw with Harry/PJ's plans 'cause I wanted to see those happen. Not that the complication wasn't wonderful, because, yeah. It was.
person nari-chan
schedule January 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
this chapter made me speechless, i am intrigued to see where this will lead and cant wait to read more.
person autumngold
schedule January 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You write the best stories! I have to admit Petunia has never been my favorite, but you have made her amazing! Thank goodness she was able to keep Dumbledore from reading her mind! Can't wait for more!
person chrissy
schedule December 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Cool story!!! Look forward to seeing just what happens next!
schedule December 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, this is certainly different and looks really interesting! It's a lot to take in lol. That chapter made my head spin a bit ^^; Can't wait to read more!
person imsandir
schedule December 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far, looking forward to seeing where you take it!!!
person snape_lust
schedule December 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
yay! a new story!

I have always enjoyed stories where harry get's away from DD, hogwarts, Brittan at a young age, but never read one that has the help or direction of petunia. A creative twist that I like as no matter how sly a 13 year old is, they just don't know what to do or how to go about it, or have the legal authority to accomplish anything. An adult would be needed.

I very much look forward to this story, especially since harry or PJ has no plans to get involved as a returning conquering hero to save UK from it's own messes, then be the obedient whipping boy for the rest of his life.

I also like the journalist angle and just can't wait to see where you take this story. Please please don't let him solve UK's problems in an effort to just to shut them up. I really hope to see where Brittan either solves it's own problem, or succumbs to their apathy and willingness to "employ" child soldiers in order to keep themselves out of the fight. using the trick of PJ being a journalist, he can pop up in your story at random times with more info or new perspectives and then disappear to watch the fallout and move on to his next story.

Gah...more please!!!