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for Toonie\'s Love

by SpeedyTomato

person BAFan
schedule June 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 9

"'There is a teaser about an upcoming article I saw in a few of our newspapers. They weren't much, but I was hoping, as PJ's come from the colonies, they might have more,' Albus explained, looking between all of them."

The colonies??? I remember him using the same word in an earlier chapter. What century does Albus think it is, for Pete's sake? I'm a bit surprised that PJ didn't give him a hard time over that.
person BAFan
schedule June 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 10 (again)

Okay, I'm all caught up again. A good chapter, but are we going to see the actual article? 'Cause I, for one, would really like to read it!

person snape_lust
schedule June 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'll have to re-read the story again because for the life of me, i cannot remember all the details that were supposed to be in the articles.

The scene with Hedwig in the previous chapter was brilliant.
person BAFan
schedule May 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 9

Whew! Petunia's safely away and I noticed that nothing was said about Sirius or Remus doing something to Vernon. ;-)
person mjd
schedule May 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well even though Harry promised to not hurt Vernon nothing was said about Remus and Sirius hurting him. :D
person autumngold
schedule May 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous story! I have to admit that I was so scared that after all Petunia did for Harry he wouldn't be able to get her away from Vernon. Thank you so very, very much for keeping her safe. I am incredibly happy that she will now have a happy life. Excellent update! Can't wait for more!
person blackcallalily
schedule May 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!! hope you update soon!!!
person psychosmurf
schedule May 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch 1: Great start. Only thing I though of though is that I would assume that Dumbledore would have slipped Petunia some veratiserum to get the location out of her. Ah well. I'll shut up and stop thinking. LOL
person nari-chan
schedule May 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
love this story so far. please update again soon i cant wait to see how they shut up the screaming picture.
person sarah
schedule April 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
wow, everything is coming out. I hope that the order doesn't actually try to ignore Dudley as i can just see PJ trying to protect him himself. And I'm trying to guess who will figure out who he is first, either Hermione or Snape... my money is on Snape though (please don't collect if I'm wrong though I don't have much lol). Can't wait to see the tension around the order when that article comes out and what Toonie is going to think of Remus/ Sirius or if she remembers them or not (or had even met them before). Glad that PJ is trying to protect Snape, I wonder how he will react when he finds out who PJ really is... I mean Lily's son who he was supposed to protect, but disappeared on one hand, but his past tormentor's son on the other. Anyways just rambling, can't wait for you next chapter :)