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Ch. 12

I'm a bit surprised that no one has noticed the similarity in names between Sirius's new friend "PJ" (can't remember his last name) and JP Bedlam, reporter.

Edited to add that I checked, and PJ's last name is Broadmoor. Bedlam and Broadmoor were two notorious insane asylums in Victorian times. (Broadmoor still exists today as a psychiatric hospital.) This is another similarity tying the two names together.

Your update is beyond outstanding! I love that Harry and Sirius are going to give their relatioship a try! Thank goodness they both have gotten over some of their hangups. I am also glad that Ginny was knocked back a little. I don't care if you are a man or a woman, no means no. I think it is disgusting when someone won't back off when someone else says they aren't interested. Ginny is just a disgusting, immoral person. I hope soon everyone stops making excuses for her behavoir, and starts holding her accoutable for her actions. Fabulous update! This is an incredible story! Can't wait to find out what will happen next!

I really love this chapter! I like how Harry is here but i don't remenber what Hermione. I will reread your story for seeing what she did!

Outstanding update! It makes me surprised, however, how the Order still follows along after Dumbledore like willing sheep. Sure, some like Arthur, Bill, and Moody are starting to question things, but they don't say anything about Dumbledore questioning the reporters. The only reason he would want to do that is to get his hands on Harry, which they agreed not to do during the last meeting. I just hope that PJ rips Dumbledore and Hermione apart in his next article, or should I say JP?! Excellent new chapter! I can't wait to find out what will happen next!

Ch. 11

"...With that, he began to give various things to keep watch for and how to prepare. He also wanted time to read the article again and dissect what was there more thoroughly. Once he did that, he would know how to go about this better. Plus, he needed time for everyone to cool down before he could get them going how he wanted."

And it seems that Albus is still scheming. Unbelievable.

Good chapter!

Only just found this story, really enjoying it. I loved the interference that Sirius and Remus are running! So sneaky!

Love your update! I am so glad that finally some of the Order members are starting to think for themselves and not follow Dumbledore's plans like he is some God. If people really stop to think about it, the prophecy doesn't say what year Voldemort will mark someone as his equal. It doesn't have to be either Neville or Harry. Who knows, maybe someone in the past several years has been marked by Voldemort who has a late July birthday. Wonderful new chapter! Can't wait for more!

I love PJ's article! Especially the parts about Ron and Ginny. Was there anything in it about Hermione and her know-it-all ways? As for Dumbledore, he is such an idiot. I can't believe that he actually still thinks he is more intelligent than others. With all of the mistakes he has made, I think it proves that most people are smarter than him. Thank you for your incredible new chapter! Can't wait for PJ and Sirius' celebration!

Ch. 10

"'As it's after noon, could you see if PJ is amiable to checking if his papers are in?'"

I have been seeing this a lot lately. Maybe it's just a new bit of slang that I'm not familiar with, but it seems to me that it's just confusion between two similar-sounding words. Amiable means good-natured, pleasant (he has an amiable personality). The word I think was intended is "amenable," (pronounced amEENable) meaning cooperative or agreeable, in the sense of agreeing to something. Their meanings are similar but nonetheless there is a distinction between the two.

And now I have to admit that I can't leave an actual review of this chapter because I'm going to have to go back and re-read a few chapters, as I don't understand what's going on.

Yeah I can just pic harry bending over and giving Sirius an eye full.