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for Toonie\'s Love

by SpeedyTomato

person whitebuffalowmn
schedule January 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I hate cliffhanger's! lol But other than that it was a great chapter, and I eagerly await your next installment. thank you for you and for writing and sharing this fabulous story with others.
person staar
schedule January 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
and it starts and he is where he never whited to be but now he has Black !!!! Thanks for the update !!!
person phoenix-rob
schedule December 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love your writing style and how the story is developing. How's PJ going to cope now he is being targeted. Can they keep his real identity from being uncovered. Can't wait for more PJ and Sirius interaction. HOT HOT HOT
schedule December 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was a close call! I am glad that they got out of there with only a minor injury!! I hope that Draco gets caught!
person autumngold
schedule December 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your incredible update! Thank goodness PJ had the portkey, it would have been embarrasing to have been killed by Draco. I wonder if he was caught? Hopefully, if he was, they were able to catch his father too. Excellent update! Hope you have a wonderful new year!
person autumngold
schedule November 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your incredible new chapter! I am so glad that Sirius and PJ told Remus the truth about their relationship. It's good that they aren't keeping secrets from Sirius' closest friend. Is it smart of them, however, to bring Tonks in on the secret? The more people that know, the more chance that someone might slip up around Dumbledore. Wonderful update! Can't wait for more!
person Jan
schedule October 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
As barmy as those two birds are, they are defenetly up to something, can't wait and see what, please update chapter 17 soon ^_^
person autumngold
schedule October 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Your story is so wonderful! Thank you for your incredible update! I love how Sirius and Harry (PJ) are getting closer. I just hope that Dumbledore keeps his nose out of their business. I don't trust that old meddler at all. Just the fact that he is still looking for Harry, after the article told of his feelings about Dumbledore is troubling. Excellent update! Can't wait for more!
person Jan
schedule October 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
LMAO, seeing as we have found Edgar and PJ already has Poe, will there be a third? Named Allan? That way they'll be complete Edgar Allan Poe ^_~ please update chapter 16 soon.
person autumngold
schedule October 4, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous new chapter! I am so glad that PJ has got DuBois (sorry if I got his name wrong) on the Prophet's case. Hopefully he is going to have him do some digging on Hermione too. For someone who is thought of as so smart, she doesn't have any sense. After Harry's article, why is she still looking for him? Just because Dumbledore says? If Dumbledore told her to jump off a bridge or kill someone, I am sure she would follow his instructions to the letter. Thank you for your excellent update! Can't wait for more!