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for Toonie\'s Love

by SpeedyTomato

person R.L. Foxx
schedule April 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Really liking this :) the idea is great and it's had some really good funny moments in it. Like to see Petunia in a good light every once in a while. Looking forward to see where this new info will go
person starr
schedule April 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
wow to bad the notes and letter's of hid mom don't tell him more about what is happening !!!! Thanls for the update !!!:):)
person autumngold
schedule April 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I worry so much for PJ, he is living in the belly of the enemy. With Dumbledore around all of the time he can never be safe. Hopefully soon everyone will realize how corrupt both sides of the conflict are. Thank goodness Petunia saved Harry from Dumbledore and his manipulations. Incredible update! Thank you for your wonderful new chapter! Can't wait to see what well happen next!
person spk
schedule April 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely FANTASTIC! Love the idea of a loving Petunia. Such a unique story idea. Great characterizations. Can't wait to read more. :)
schedule March 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
No lie, started reading for smut. Stayed for content and quality. You have a great story here.
person rigger42
schedule March 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm a little surprised that Harry isn't paranoid enough to ask Tonks to do some kind of wizards oath, but its a nice nod to how much he trusts Remus and Sirius. I also like how nonjudgmental Tonks is about their relationship.

Visiting Tooney is interesting since he had to put in an application for the portkey which means someone could possibly find out his destination and be waiting...

Another kind of crazy question is about Snape and the prophecy. Honestly, if he hadn't said it, someone else would have, though I get the emotional baggage tied to it being someone he knows. Also, it wasn't obviously a pointer to his parents and Snape regretted it in the end, so hopefully that will be considered. Not that Snape is much of a presence or integral to his life, it just doesn't seem like something that really has much bearing on present day except for explaining why he spies.

I liked the fact that people pointed out that the prophecy is probably already fulfilled if it meant anything in the first place, and if it was about destroying the horcrux that is already done.

Does Albus even consider at this point other Horcrux may exist? So far we haven't seen any indication he is looking for any. Or do they exist in this reality?

One thing someone with investigative skills needs to point out -- Aurors or PJ -- is that if they keep looking for Harry and get close, someone else can follow the breadcrumbs they leave behind while researching and questioning. So if Hermione persists, she could lead Voldemort right to Harry.

....why do I feel like I've read a scene where Hermione is researching PJ and he warns her off? Am I conflating with another fic? LOL.
person starr
schedule March 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
so found out it was Snape that gave it away, I hope he knows or finds out that it was rat face that sold them out !!!!!!! he should tell Black this !!!!!! Thanks again !!!!!!
person autumngold
schedule March 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the wonderful update to your incredible story! I am glad that PJ finally knows who betrayed his family. It might be bad, however, to let Sirius know. I doubt he would be able to keep it secret. However, if it was released in another interview . . . Excellent new chapter! Can't wait for more!
person autumngold
schedule February 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Outstanding update! I can't wait for Granger and Draco to be raked over the coals in the newspaper. Of course, no matter what it says neither of them will believe it. Hermione will never believe she isn't perfect and Draco will never believe he will pay for his sins. I hope that PJ and his friend can prove them wrong. Wonderful new chapter! Can't wait for more!
person whitebuffalowmn
schedule January 4, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I LAUGHED MY BUTT OFF!!! omg Edgar and Poe... it's too funny! Don't tell me another one is going to come into the picture... named Allen?

kudos on what you have written so far. I never expected the story to be this great. guess that shows me huh!?