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December 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
...........why why why do you do this?! :( so close but yet so far! *pouts* please don't tease the two too much longer, I love it!
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December 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
this is by far the best and most well written story I have read in a long time, positively enthralling.
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December 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this story and cannot wait for more. You had me laughing and on the verge of tears, my stomach tied in knots and fingers shaking anxiously. Keep up the great work.
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December 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I want them to get together so bad. I think Severus should just tell Harry he likes him because Harry is full of self doubt and giving little hints aren't working. Now that I think about it most guys don't get hints you have to directly say if you like them.
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December 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1
Oh, I like this beginning!
Oh, I like this beginning!
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December 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 2
"Once he was out of sight, I jumped, spun around mid-flight, and punched my fist in the air. Yes! I have a dinner date with Severus Snape! Oh my god
"Once he was out of sight, I jumped, spun around mid-flight, and punched my fist in the air. Yes! I have a dinner date with Severus Snape! Oh my god
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December 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 3
"'Wow!' I said to myself. 'Oh my god
"'Wow!' I said to myself. 'Oh my god
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December 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 5
Good chapter. Such a rollercoaster of emotions, from jubilation at the beginning, to despair and melancholy in the middle, and then the return of happiness at the end. Great job.
One thing: according to the HP Lexicon, it's Legilimency, not Legilimancy. Just thought I'd mention it.
Good chapter. Such a rollercoaster of emotions, from jubilation at the beginning, to despair and melancholy in the middle, and then the return of happiness at the end. Great job.
One thing: according to the HP Lexicon, it's Legilimency, not Legilimancy. Just thought I'd mention it.
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December 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 6
Oy vey. Harry, Harry, Harry. *shaking head*
Oy vey. Harry, Harry, Harry. *shaking head*
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December 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What an absolutely lovely story. Harry's angst in the early chapters, the slow build to romance.