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person dantae
schedule December 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13 actually got my crying. My stomach is all in knots and I don't know what to do!!! I need to know what happens next. You've dragged us along on this rollercoaster of emotions and I just can't wait to see the end, at the same time I never want it to be over! Wonderful job!
person JustSomeStranger
schedule December 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, I have never had a story that jerked my emotions around as much as this story. I can't help but to become lost in the pure emotionalism just seeping from this story. Please keep up the good work. This is by far one of the best snarrys I've ever read.
person Lmnop
schedule December 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is an exceptionally good fic. I can't wait for more! I hope that Harry's neuroses lessen as they connect further. Love!
person Becky
schedule December 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I
person cariad123
schedule December 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thirtenn fantastic chapters loved the writing style ...Adore Harry and Severus's relationship so want more Brilliant stiry
person CanisLupusUmbra
schedule December 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my grog yes I'm loving this story it's just this horribly awesome balance of angst and everything else. I was so mad that it came to the current chapter and it's this huge cliffhanger. But I'm hoping you finish this because wow I'm just loving it.
person BAFan
schedule December 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Progress at last! Er, I think.
schedule December 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I need more! Its so good it hurts. Please. I need this story to end on a good note. They are so close , so close. Just a couple more little pushes. Ohhh this story is fantastic.
schedule December 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my life, talk about sexual tension! I love Harry's career. Brilliant story, incredibly we'll written, can't wait for more.
person delia cerrano
schedule December 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
What a tease! I can't wait for "tomorrow" when Severus will be back to see Harry and maybe...finally...Severus will make a definite move on Harry and Harry won't run away will he?