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by thewandcrafter

person Smile317
schedule February 14, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Just found this story. Loved it. I'm sorry it is unfinished 😔

person Anonymous
schedule July 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM

So I just found this. Read all 13 chapters in the space on an hour. And it stop there!! Are you mad! The writing was beautiful, you've pulled me into a world with a very believable severus and harry. And I need more. Please update this soon. It'd be a shame to leave such a wonderful story as unfinished when I can feel that your so close to the end. Keep up the awesome work. 

person Antuhsa
schedule April 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I was especially amazed by your ideas concerning Harry's job. Very imaginative. I do wish you had shown us some of the dislike between Harry and Severus though. In your story they seem to have forgotten about it, which is a little unbelievable. I also feel the near rape scene didn't quite fit, as others have pointed out as well. Either way, I enjoyed the story very much and hope you are going to finish it one day.
person Anon
schedule January 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this -it wld b great to see it finishd, to see how harry gets his man.
I really enjoyed Harry's train of thought and the humour u have included. Thanks for writing.
person LyraRFIM
schedule September 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Drat. I need more... I was reading and then it suddenly stopped at chapter 13... I got sucked into the story so deeply that I didn't even notice that I was near the end of the available chapters. May I have more, please? And thank you for such a great story!
person Alonna
schedule June 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Pleeeeeeease update soon, I'm dying to read more! I think I've only read this story like 5x. Keep up the good work.
person AR
schedule April 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is an incredible harry/severus story! I love the slow buildup, and I can't wait for the next chapter after the wedding! Please update soon!!
person VSBree
schedule January 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love the development of your characters and their relationship. I'm an impatient little girlie, but I enjoyed your well-written story. Cannot wait for the next chapter!
person pooh
schedule December 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Had to stop the reading...I do hope you are going to finish this story, its really good...
on to the next chapters...
person pooh
schedule December 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM, good chapter..
on to the next one