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I found this story 48 hours ago and couldn't tear myself away from it until I reached the last chapter. You are a phenomenal writer! The characters are so rich in personality and the emotions are so powerful I found myself holding my breath reading parts of it! I'm on the edge of my seat! I hope the next update is soon! It has been so long since I have read a fanfic that leaves me begging for more!

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I love this story so much! Please update more often. :)

Well, this should be interesting. lol I laughed out loud at his reaction to her "friendship." I look forward to them in her very muggle house with her parents, almost as much as I look forward to her figuring out she's a girl. Where the hell is her libido?! Girls mature so much faster than boys, but she's physiologically a 10 year old. Come on girl, wake up! I know they have to form a more sure friendship before things progress, but she should at least be tingly. lol Thanks! HG4eva

I love this story so much!!!!!! It is so suspenseful and sweet and amazing and I could just go on and on! I hope you are writing the next chapter soon!!

I'm loving this story, but this last chapter has me a bit confused. Why couldn't Hermione use her powers to get away from two non-magical men? If she is indeed a sorceress, why would she be in a 'dsmsel-in-distress' postion against muggles? COuldn't she have used her powers to break her bindings and protect herself? ...Anyway. it's an exciting tale and I am enjoying it despite this confusion.

Omg this story is sooooooooooooo good!! Nail biting after each chapter! If there is more I can't wait a sequel even!!

That was beautifully, if horribly, done. I thank you for every word and him saving her. But, the overwhelming thought in my head? Who the hell is Boleslaw?! And, the second? Who where the two men who were talking? Loving it still. Thanks! HG4eva

I really like this story. It's quite original and an emotional roller coaster for the characters, which is always a bonus.

I might suggest that you find a beta, however, if only to double check spelling. I promise, I do not mean that in a hurtful way, I honestly adore this story. I noticed that several times you spelled "Lucius", as in Lucius Malfoy, Draco's father- as "Luscious", as in (of food or wine) having a pleasingly rich, sweet taste. I think your word processor just doesn't realize the difference in spell-check. There's nothing wrong with that! But this is why I am saying you may want to find a beta, or someone to informally double-check your spelling... I'll do it if you want. I'm in the forum under MorningSnow. I've never been someone's official beta, just checking spelling.

Wow! That was quite an update. I am glad he was able to help her in the end, despite having no spells left. I wonder if she was attacked with how panicked she gets about being anything near sexual. Was Krum more violent than she let on? Was someone else? And, I feel awful for both of them, but his guilt was palpable. Another job well done and I look forward to more. Thank you, HG4eva

i really liked the first chapter. but it's missing the second?