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for My Chance of Being Open Was Broken

by articcat621

schedule October 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Technical writing is okay. But there's not enough content to even be a drabble.
person Matt01
schedule December 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Although it's a very short story, you have set a very interesting storyline. I think you should run with this, you have a good start, now run with it. You are going to make a great book, I believe in you.