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I like your stories. And I wouldn't call it 'sick'. Haha, you could have written about Ginny getting aroused by a bowl of fruit. Personally, I like the adultery and depravity if this much more though. Honestly, you work reminds of a really good hentai turned into a story. So five stars! This rocks!

Still waiting for the Cuckoldry aspect of the story, I wanna see Harry watching Ginny fucking Draco and liking it, and licking her creampie afterwards, lol.

Still waiting for the Cuckoldry aspect of the story, I wanna see Harry watching Ginny fucking Draco and liking it, and licking her creampie afterwards, lol.

plz write more get ginny pregnant with draco kid tell how harry raise someone kid

i love ur writing. its amazing and i cant tell u how many times i have read "candy", which is.. i cant even describe how amazing that story is. the ideas are boundless and though the updates are few, i check for them all the time. this story (witchcraft and cuckoldry) is quickly becoming my favorite (candy was my previous favorite) and i also loved your story with kim possible. i dont know where the inspiration comes from but it is unbelievably brilliant and u have been the cause of many a pleasurable night. i hope u continue with all your stories and i absolutely cannot wait for more :) my email is curlysupergirl@gmail.com and if u ever need to bounce ideas or anything like it, i cant say ill be a huge help but id love to help. (i have a little experience in the dom/sub world though my writing is largely on the sappy, loving part of submission but i do have some racy poems/writings if ur interesting.) for the last time (i promise haha)-- amazing :) you are amazing.

oh and ignore the haters- if they want to read stories about how amazing harry is they can read the original series (which i loved). but this is fanfiction :) we take our favorite characters, pair them up with other favorite characters, change peoples backgrounds and turn innocent stories into smut :D thats the whole point lol. i loved it. keep writing the way u do :))))

HAVE GINNY RIDE HIS BIG COCK

This is good book, the only bad thing I have to say is that it just needs to be cleaned up around the edges and overall flow of the story.

Other then that, at it's core you have a really good story.

I found this chapter interesting. First, Malfoy starts out by saying that he owes Harry for keeping family out of prison, but to repay that favor, he turns Harry's wife into a slut who fucks all of Harry's friends, but gives Harry nothing. Moreover, Harry who has never had a family and has been abused all his life, you have his wife cheat on him merely because he cannot please her? I just found this chapter very confusing considering the first few chapters that dumps on Harry, destroyed Harry's marriage with Ginny, lets Ginny sleep with anybody, but wants Malfoy to keep the fact Ginny is a whore from getting out to the public (especially Harry).

I wanted to ask something else. If Harry is such a failure as a man and cannot please Ginny, why does she stay married to Harry? Why not just divorce Harry and marry her master, Malfoy. I understand this is your story, and you can write it however you wish, I just feel sorry for Harry who has a wife that sleeps with everybody in that club, despite saving the world and working day and night as an auror, especially with three young children.

Another question is how is Harry and Ron going to be in this story. Since both seem to be absolute failures at pleasing women, I cannot see how that can play any significant part in this story.