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for Witchcraft and Cuckoldry

by TheDarkWonker

person Anon
schedule March 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I find it strange considering in canon Lucy and Draculina are more submissive than Narcissa.
person Anon
schedule March 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Your Draco changes greatly between now and your latest chapter.
person jj
schedule February 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
plz write more soon and start cuckolding harry or have draco fuck harry kids
person jj
schedule February 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
plz write more soon and start cuckolding harry or have draco fuck harry kids
person Atharos
schedule February 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
excellent story, i'm really looking forward to the coming parts of the story, it'll to read harry as the cuckold rather than the bull. as far as i'm aware this is one of only two stories of this nature out there. and the only one that has ginny as the hotwife. hope you muse returns soon, this story is ridiculously hot.
person Harb
schedule December 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This Can't be the last chapter!! I love your story, keep going?
person Muramasa
schedule November 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm not normally a fan of Draco centric stories so despite loving your other works, it's taken me a while yo get round to this. Glad I decided to take the risk! Your themes and characters are actually quite interesting, though as some have said they can seem a little rushed or even riddled with plot holes at times I'm quite happy with my willing suspension of disbelief. The interesting part for me is how this may actually be a somewhat realistic characterisation, with the canon author saying that Harry and Ginny get divorced. Draco on the other hand may well have been forced to grow up and change his personality and the hidden world of the purebloods.
As a final point, the smut for me is amazing. I'm really not a fan of malesubs but for some reason you always seem to put it in just the right way and I feel it is the way you feminise the characters, a nearly untouched theme in fanfiction. If you ever need to bounce ideas or even just encouragement, my email is muramasa@live.co.uk . Being secondary account, I may not see any messages for a while.
Now I understand you're having fun being a cumaddicted whore but stop being so selfish and get back to writing! You have a fanbase to please.
person Revan_55
schedule October 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
All i'm gonna say is hurry up and get to the part where harry joins and hermione shows up.
person Robert
schedule October 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Can you actually just answer why magic hasn't been used to fix Harry's problems in relation to sex? It just feels like you completely omit magic when it should be beneficial to Harry, and instead angle it such that it benefits only everyone else that's not him.

That's what makes this fic rather poorly written.
person Anon
schedule October 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Bashing the Boy-Hero?! Nice story! Thanks!