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December 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is better than I expected.
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December 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is not good, I wonder if they are going to be able to fix it before the older elven notice they are having problems.
Please update chapter 17 soon ^_^
Please update chapter 17 soon ^_^
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December 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Okay there's quite a few grammar and spelling mistakes in this fic, but the one that is bothering me the most is you keep say "reframing" when you mean "refraining". The others are so minor, it doesn't really matter. This is good so far, so if you just correct that grammar mistake this fic would be great.
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December 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
One bad move after the other. This could get way serious. If they don't stop everything and take the time to talk it all out and get their emotions & hormones under control, they risk ruining the trust & love they have.
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December 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, absolutely can't wait for more!!!!!
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December 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! Please update soon. Let me know when you do, ok?
katrina.n.smith89@gmail.com
katrina.n.smith89@gmail.com
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November 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow:) more?
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November 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
enjoyed, would like more asap ^^
~eros
~eros
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November 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I know I promised to write my essay first...but I was sooooooooo curious! So I just started the first chapter! I'm gonna love this story! Harry is so calm about all of it...i wonder of it stays that way.
on another note, in your summary the first word misses a letter...
on another note, in your summary the first word misses a letter...
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November 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Was Charlie really just testing Draco?? Hmmmm. What is Harry up to whispering with Ron in front of Draco? I thought he really cared for Draco? Hope Draco & Harry don't forget about Blaise & Pansy...they are up to no good for sure!