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It's an excellent start. To bad never finished!

It is a fantastic story!  Just a few grammar & spelling errors.  You probably fixed the sorting of Ron.  If the hat was true, he would be slytherin or Hufflepuff! Betrayer, or loyal to family.

It is a Fantastic story! Can't wait for more chapters!

You should totally update this story its a great story.

Great . I've been waiting for this story. Can't wait to read more.

now i think the best thing to happen to harry and rose would be for rose to wake up first and notice harry's little problem namely a hard on and decide to check it out since this would be something new she has never seen before namely is little penis standing up rock hard. an when harry wakes up rose talks harry into showing her how to make his hard on soft again. an of course the next step down this road would be her wanting to help him make it soft again.

Really the sorting hat is called Trevor?

Hi again!!!

This was a great chapter too!! It's good that Harry is making new friends, most of them girls, so he is going to have plenty of them to choose when he gets older.

I also love that it was Daphne the one Harry rescue, so they get close friends!!

It was a really good idea that Harry talked about what happened with McGonagall in her office, so Snape couldn't hear!

I also like that Harry told Rose and Hermione everything that had happened!!!

Again, thank you for this amazing story and see you in next chapter!!!

good story glad u brought it over here from fanfiction please keep writing

Hi again!!!

I like the way your are re-writting Harry's first year in Hogwarts. I agree it's so much better having a twin sister he can rely on.

I think it was sweet Harry decided to stay with Rose in Hogwarts for Christmas, and I'm sure there will be many other oportunities to spend time with Daphne, and with Hermione of course!!!

I love the scene of Harry giving Rose his present, and the next moment they are sharing this first kiss. I think it was cute and I think it's a good idea that you are starting to show them growing closer so it would be more natural when they are older.

And now they have the invisibility cloak, they are going to discover many things like overhearing Dumbledore and Snape, althought this one was intended.

I also like the effect that Rose has on Harry, so she can slow him, and make him think things and not acting on them rigth away.

And I like hints like having them holding hands.

Again, thank you for this amazing story and see you in next chapter!!!