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Me again. I just realized that you might've been asking for suggestions for where to take things with the fic. If so, please ignore the first half(or so) of my last review.
Cheers,
~Wulf

This is an awesome story, will you be writing more?

I hope you plan on updating this some more, it is awesome.

Keep up the hard work. This is a nices slice of porn and plot keep up the hard work.

Ideas:
-Rosaline Potter enters Lily's room scared and teary eyed with a blood on her panites and see Lily and Harry lying nude on her mother's bed. She could ask what's going on which would scare them. Lilly could explain periods, tell her how she will from now on be interested in boys or/and girls and offer to eucate her as she did /with Harry if she promise to keep it quiet.
-a joined bath with Lilly, Harry and his sisters in which he will research if other/younger girls reacts the same as Lilly.
-a misplaced or misused lust potion infulences more women/girls than just Lilly.
-a drinking night with Lilly and Tonks leads to a girl sex which Harry observes and joins when both women are passed out. They could wake up bound with him taking turns in banging them. Tonks could be stationed as kadet auror security.
-Harry could ask or borrow Lilly's wand to put a see through charm on his glassess.
-Harry could watch a porn movie with Lilly and ask her about bondague.
-Lilly could take her children swimming and shagg with Harry without her daughters being any wiser despite them watching the whole encounter.
-you could add an family event in which Lilly and her daughters dance around bonfire and are one by one taken by Harry.
-someone, a woman, could visit the Potters and find Harry and Lily in a compromising incestual situation. To silence said woman, they could kiddnap her and hide in a trunk where they would bind her and use every means (bondague, BDSM) to convince her to keep silence. Could be Tonks whose price could be a marriage contract to Harry. Lilly could trick her into signing one which allows Harry seeking pleasure with other women (namely with Lilly herself) and gives Harry nearly total control of Nym. She could be used for spicing up Lilly's and Harry's sex life and keeping James unaware of what's going on.
-some outdoor sex / voyage would be welcome. Perhaps Lilly could take her children on vacation in France near nudists' beach?
-I'd like to see Lilly trying to enslave a Veela (she could be unaware the bird can turn into a girl) in order to give Harry a pet.
-Lilly could take Harry to visit Alice Longbottom in St.Mungo's ward and he could use the opportunity to give his godmother some pleasure
-Harry and Lilly could play with polyjuice.
-Hermione with her widowed mother could stay at Harry's house. He and Lilly could be forced to seduce them if they want to keep their activities going.
-Lilly could has a potion accident and de age herself enough to be forced to redo Hogwarts starting at Harry's year. It could deactivate her marriage to James seeing as he would be considered a pedophil in wizarding world if they stayed together. Harry/virgin Lilly could be interesting.
-Lilly could blow up some potion and her animagus form could become Harry's pet/familiar which would force her to obey him and stay close even during Hogwarts)
-you could think about some non-con with Lilly teaching Harry Obliviation charm (f.e. Petunia comming for a visit or Bellatrix attacking).
-you could also think about Harry/James body exchange prank. Somethink that will force "James" to take a break from being an auror and force the real one to go back to school.

Nice lessons! Next time she should star by pointing him her erogenous spots. Yes, she's getting a kick at pleasuring him, but if she wants to train him up as a lover, Lily should teach her her body no? Other than that, it's a nice story with an actual plot and a nice build up. I say keep up the good work. :)

I think maybe focusing more on Lily's feelings while pleasuring Harry, as well as his own would have maybe made this more erotic, you kind of just said what was going on a bit more than you did in the chapter 2 lemon.

I'd like to see Harry come to Lily and ask for a lesson.

Perhaps something to do with what girls like to wear, Lily could model outfits for him? Maybe Lily could wear something teasing, and then tell Harry that she'll introduce him to all her outfits if he does something for her.

Or perhaps just the general concept of her being more willing to reward Harry or do what he wants after he does things she approves of, I guess with handjob/oral currently or progressing to a titjob.

I really hope you update soon!

Interested to see where you plan on taking this as the end of ch 3 indicates an upcoming lemon but the A/N contradicts that.

I like the way you're taking this, it seems believable, though I'd like to see more lemons (and it only makes sense to me that now that Harry has been exposed to sex and enjoyed it, he would angle for more). Maybe you could work it into your lessons as a reward or something? Update more please!

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